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Array ( [sid] => 186618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mesmerising moon [time] => 2019-10-29 19:05:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The moon trembled
As my memories flew by
The whole universe spun
My empty shell remained still
While my thoughts surrounded
The endless silence
Nostalgic smell of frost felt the air
Awakening my warm flowing heart
Leaving a vague sadness
As the moons shining light
Went into the light of my soul
Took me further out to the empty sea
Of longings and faded dreams
The moons light went brighter
Over shining all the sorrow from within
Sprawling hope leaped into my mind
Formed magic new ways
The night sky trembled with new born dreams
Every star woke from the deepest darkness
My flowing tears reflected the mesmerising moon
Glorious bonds shared our thoughts
An understanding was formed
And widened our world [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Apollonia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Mesmerising moon

Contributed by Apollonia on Tuesday, 29th October 2019 @ 07:05:22 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The moon trembled
As my memories flew by
The whole universe spun
My empty shell remained still
While my thoughts surrounded
The endless silence
Nostalgic smell of frost felt the air
Awakening my warm flowing heart
Leaving a vague sadness
As the moons shining light
Went into the light of my soul
Took me further out to the empty sea
Of longings and faded dreams
The moons light went brighter
Over shining all the sorrow from within
Sprawling hope leaped into my mind
Formed magic new ways
The night sky trembled with new born dreams
Every star woke from the deepest darkness
My flowing tears reflected the mesmerising moon
Glorious bonds shared our thoughts
An understanding was formed
And widened our world

Copyright © Apollonia ... [ 2019-10-29 19:05:22]
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Re: Mesmerising moon (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Tuesday, 29th October 2019 @ 11:31:45 PM AEST
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Aww bless you x that is truly beautiful, its like sadness singing a song,, mesmerising, haunting and serene, so so beautiful I loved it, thanks for giving us something so special to read. I/'/m going to read more of your poems now.

Re: Mesmerising moon (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 31st October 2019 @ 04:16:30 AM AEST
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oh yes
loved the way this flowed
and how an understanding
was formed under a mesmerizing moon
thanx for sharing

Re: Mesmerising moon (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 4th November 2019 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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What a wonderful mesmerizing write.
A very special poem. I love this.

Re: Mesmerising moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Thursday, 7th November 2019 @ 04:27:32 PM AEST
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I can only guess at the meanings behind this, yet it stirs up feelings of sadness, hope and awakenings.

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