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hollow echoing thuds,
moody gloomy hell,
aching breaking heart,
crumbling jagged glass,
pieces falling apart,
cutting slashing sharp,
wounds leaking blood,
lonely blackened skein,
soul twisted dark,
foul tasting death,
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Anon Heavy Footfalls

Contributed by baronhawk on Tuesday, 28th May 2019 @ 04:42:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Anon heavy footfalls,
hollow echoing thuds,
moody gloomy hell,
aching breaking heart,
crumbling jagged glass,
pieces falling apart,
cutting slashing sharp,
wounds leaking blood,
lonely blackened skein,
soul twisted dark,
foul tasting death,
dousing life/'/s spark.

Copyright Â© baronhawk ... [ 2019-05-28 04:42:16]
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Re: Anon Heavy Footfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Tuesday, 28th May 2019 @ 01:05:34 PM AEST
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Well now, You definitely have a way with the dark. Or should I say it seems to have its way with you? Regardless, a well written , descriptive piece. Leaves me wanting those lights to come back on soon!

Re: Anon Heavy Footfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 28th May 2019 @ 03:17:04 PM AEST
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No lunch for me today...……… :)

Re: Anon Heavy Footfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 30th May 2019 @ 08:33:55 AM AEST
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Dark and dangerous flow
well done

Re: Anon Heavy Footfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd June 2019 @ 08:45:50 AM AEST
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too soon, a negatively charged anion
particle clambers slowly and with
sudden veracity, beckoning me
the light of my eye, the cracking
of dawn, encircles my thought
in constant dream while I sleep

And I am easily awakened before
it makes its sound

Peace!

Re: Anon Heavy Footfalls (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 6th July 2019 @ 12:27:34 AM AEST
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It probably wasn/'/t the best time for me to read this, at night in a room full of silence.
I/'/m glad the door is locked, you/'/ve sent me a chill which I am obliged to recieve

Nice work

Steve

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