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Array ( [sid] => 185922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Three Good Swings [time] => 2019-02-24 03:09:39 [hometext] => It is said we are captives to fate. I say who gives a damn and crack open a cold one 👍 [bodytext] =>
It"s finally my turn at bat
I fix the pants and tug the hat
And step right up beside the plate
The ball held in the hand of fate
Whose awesome speed and sneaky curve
Can cause the strong to loose their nerve
But I do not a muscle twitch
As I await his stealthy pitch



He winds and now the ball does fly
I swing!

With a sizzle it passes by
The catcher laughs, my head is numb
The umpire smiles and says "strike one"


I dig the cleats and give a glare
Once more the ball is in the air
I swing!!

It weaves and slides right through
The umpire smiles and says "strike two"


Again he hurls that devils sphere
And as I see it drawing near
With mighty force I set bat free!!!!

The umpire smiles and says "strike three"





No moral here or hidden meaning
On this, the game of life"s convening
I"m happy with the little things
Like hotdogs, beer, and three good swings



L. Carling

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Three Good Swings

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 03:09:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems




It"s finally my turn at bat
I fix the pants and tug the hat
And step right up beside the plate
The ball held in the hand of fate
Whose awesome speed and sneaky curve
Can cause the strong to loose their nerve
But I do not a muscle twitch
As I await his stealthy pitch



He winds and now the ball does fly
I swing!

With a sizzle it passes by
The catcher laughs, my head is numb
The umpire smiles and says "strike one"


I dig the cleats and give a glare
Once more the ball is in the air
I swing!!

It weaves and slides right through
The umpire smiles and says "strike two"


Again he hurls that devils sphere
And as I see it drawing near
With mighty force I set bat free!!!!

The umpire smiles and says "strike three"





No moral here or hidden meaning
On this, the game of life"s convening
I"m happy with the little things
Like hotdogs, beer, and three good swings



L. Carling





Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2019-02-24 03:09:39]
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Re: Three Good Swings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 06:26:07 AM AEST
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This poem is just way too cool!!!

Love it.

Baseball`s just gotta be my favorite sport.

Thank you for sharing!

Tim
(forever a St. Louis Cardinals fan)


Re: Three Good Swings (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 06:43:43 AM AEST
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you weave a fine tale
and we do strike often dont we
ha ha ha


Re: Three Good Swings (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 02:36:32 PM AEST
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Love this. Very charming write. I don/'/t want to see myself
in it though :)


Re: Three Good Swings (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 10:32:31 PM AEST
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I like it, Rake. Effin strike threes. We all get em every now and then. And I REALLY like the way you don/'/t moan and blubber about it. Very cool.

Inveirno


Re: Three Good Swings (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 25th February 2019 @ 11:31:19 PM AEST
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This seems very familiar. Is it a re-write of yours? Never the less, good one.

ming


Re: Three Good Swings (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 26th February 2019 @ 02:18:27 PM AEST
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Whether its the "Game of Life" or America/'/s Favorite
Pass Time...Strike Three is always the worst feeling.
We/'/ve all been there and Im sure that we will be there
plenty more times before we leave this world.
Stale hotdog, warm beer....Damn its great to be an
American :)))

Rich




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