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[aid] => mick
[title] => Floods
[time] => 2019-11-19 02:17:02
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[bodytext] => all the holes I’ve dug
and everything I’ve buried
truths I’ve been sweeping under the rug
it’s all deadweight I’ve carried
I can’t let it go
I can’t forget you
but we’ll never be the same
you can say it’s because I withdrew
but it’s just who you became
you cut me in pieces
forgot what I needed
‘til I broke down at your feet
you finally saw me bleed
is that what friends do?
there’s a hole inside me
since he’s been so far away
the pain of not being able to reach
god, I’d kill to touch his face
I wish he was here
cut myself in pieces
clinging tight to reasons
to keep myself together
but days go on forever
and I remember
these are graves I’ve dug
but it’s my hope you buried
the loss just takes my breath when it floods
I need someone to carry me
far away from here
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Floods
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2019 @ 02:17:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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all the holes I’ve dug
and everything I’ve buried
truths I’ve been sweeping under the rug
it’s all deadweight I’ve carried
I can’t let it go
I can’t forget you
but we’ll never be the same
you can say it’s because I withdrew
but it’s just who you became
you cut me in pieces
forgot what I needed
‘til I broke down at your feet
you finally saw me bleed
is that what friends do?
there’s a hole inside me
since he’s been so far away
the pain of not being able to reach
god, I’d kill to touch his face
I wish he was here
cut myself in pieces
clinging tight to reasons
to keep myself together
but days go on forever
and I remember
these are graves I’ve dug
but it’s my hope you buried
the loss just takes my breath when it floods
I need someone to carry me
far away from here
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
... [
2019-11-19 02:17:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Floods
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 20th November 2019 @ 11:18:39 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful job expressing these kind of feelings.
It’s not a great place to be, so hopefully you won’t stay too long.
The strength is in you and it’s been there all along.
Perhaps a grave is in order for something, but it isn’t for you.
Keep your chin up. Good title btw.
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Re: Floods
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 23rd November 2019 @ 04:18:02 AM AEST (User
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Haven’t felt something like this in a long time (nevertheless, it’s all too familiar). I applaud you for penning your heart’s sorrow so well here. Hugs and prayers for you,
Deidra |
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