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[title] => Just Like Lightning
[time] => 2019-04-23 13:39:12
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[bodytext] => Your love is so frightening
Just like lightning
But when I`m alone
My heart ceases to beat
Turns to stone
I think of all the good memories of us together
All the storms we weathered
At night I hear your voice calling
With my head under the pillow
I find it appalling
I`m listening but not seeing
I ask myself, what is the meaning
Your love is so frightening
Yeah, just like lightning
No longer exciting.
I try to tell myself
It`s a fight not worth fighting
Cause your love is no longer inviting
It`s so frightening just like lightning
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Just Like Lightning
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2019 @ 01:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your love is so frightening
Just like lightning
But when I`m alone
My heart ceases to beat
Turns to stone
I think of all the good memories of us together
All the storms we weathered
At night I hear your voice calling
With my head under the pillow
I find it appalling
I`m listening but not seeing
I ask myself, what is the meaning
Your love is so frightening
Yeah, just like lightning
No longer exciting.
I try to tell myself
It`s a fight not worth fighting
Cause your love is no longer inviting
It`s so frightening just like lightning
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jamesstockdale
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Re: Just Like Lightning
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2019 @ 08:51:15 PM AEST (User
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You have taken us through your thinking process on this one, a step at a time.
I like the conclusion ITS A FIGHT NOT WORTH FIGHTING. Love is gone.
The rhyme scheme makes it sound like a song when read outloud! Just like lightening.
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Re: Just Like Lightning
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 24th April 2019 @ 04:35:32 AM AEST (User
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yes it is scary when you know its over
but its just hard to let it go....
you on that love roller coaster my friend. |
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Re: Just Like Lightning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:42:50 AM AEST (User
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//// What is that saying? `Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all? Yeah, that.
Plenty of fish in the sea even though I WOULD NOT recommend plenty of fish dot com. Oi.
Pact. Meeting at 2:00 PM CST/3:00 PM EST.
Be there or be square. heehee j/k
I love this J Stockdale poet.
Thanks,
Dugan |
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