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[aid] => mick
[title] => Up and Down
[time] => 2019-04-22 15:37:52
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[bodytext] => I`m so up and down
High and low
Don`t really know what to do
Life makes me feel so blue
Thoughts of you
Go round and round in my head
Sometimes it`d be better if I was dead
No fun living a life of dread
Tired of dreaming of the silver and gold
When everything I love has turned so cold
No longer is our love so bold
That`s what I`ve been told
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[informant] => jamesstockdale
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Up and Down
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Monday, 22nd April 2019 @ 03:37:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I`m so up and down
High and low
Don`t really know what to do
Life makes me feel so blue
Thoughts of you
Go round and round in my head
Sometimes it`d be better if I was dead
No fun living a life of dread
Tired of dreaming of the silver and gold
When everything I love has turned so cold
No longer is our love so bold
That`s what I`ve been told
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jamesstockdale
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Re: Up and Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2019 @ 12:55:33 PM AEST (User
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Ah, sounds like you`re in a funk. Time to make changes?
We feel, we write, and at some point hopefully we feel better. Keep writing it out. Hope things get better for you. |
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Re: Up and Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2019 @ 09:39:38 PM AEST (User
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When you get this low, the only direction left is UP.
Love can tear us apart, as your poem testifies.
But it can heal also...if we keep our hearts door open.
Don/'/t miss the sound of the doorbell.
softerware |
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Re: Up and Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 24th April 2019 @ 04:09:01 AM AEST (User
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Emotional torture is no fun
but you gotta get back up
and do you |
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Re: Up and Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:50:31 AM AEST (User
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//// No, not better off dead. Stahp it!!!! That gives me the sads.
No, really, I can relate. I hope you`re growing out of this young man!
See? Poetry. You did it. Invoked emotion...or is that evoke emotion. Don`t make me Google the definition. Alright, alright. I`ll Google it. Right after I submit this comment. No, I`m not doing it right now. No, I am not. So there.
Ma`am, yes I would recommend this J Stockdale guy.
Thanks,
Dugan
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Re: Up and Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:52:31 AM AEST (User
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////It`s evoke. 🤷 |
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