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Standing still once more
Running ever so fast
Blinders unfolded from above
Dancing inside a full bathroom all alone

Lighter doesn’t work and yet my cigarette waits
Woman in yellow moves as if inspired by Angels
Happiness rings out loud for all to here it’s whispers
Contemplating my existence the next morning no more

Listening to someone else’s opinion of me and not caring
A clear bowl of ice water numbs the migraine headache of self
One mans opinion of another shouldn’t matter and yet often it does
My looks are too subtle; I’m covered in makeup yet no one really knows me

Ransomed randomizes the inner core of sight once more
The next day is today as I think of something else to do with my spare time
Working with my hands since my fading youth is my backup plan of plans
Music eases the mind; Dancing eases the soul; Sunlight will forever be my bare skin friend.

Copyright © Johnny Hadnot 2.13.2020

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If tomorrow never came

Contributed by Slogan on Thursday, 13th February 2020 @ 06:59:27 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Standing still once more
Running ever so fast
Blinders unfolded from above
Dancing inside a full bathroom all alone

Lighter doesn’t work and yet my cigarette waits
Woman in yellow moves as if inspired by Angels
Happiness rings out loud for all to here it’s whispers
Contemplating my existence the next morning no more

Listening to someone else’s opinion of me and not caring
A clear bowl of ice water numbs the migraine headache of self
One mans opinion of another shouldn’t matter and yet often it does
My looks are too subtle; I’m covered in makeup yet no one really knows me

Ransomed randomizes the inner core of sight once more
The next day is today as I think of something else to do with my spare time
Working with my hands since my fading youth is my backup plan of plans
Music eases the mind; Dancing eases the soul; Sunlight will forever be my bare skin friend.

Copyright © Johnny Hadnot 2.13.2020

Copyright Â© Slogan ... [ 2020-02-13 06:59:27]
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Re: If tomorrow never came (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th February 2020 @ 03:05:30 AM AEST
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you proceed with imagery that shows
profound truths, no matter another/'/s
opinion, understanding that you cannot
fully understand another persons opinion,
you could say something off the top,
and realize yourself it was a mistake,
and you take care when others might
do the same as well.
We should be glad that we
are not robots, we cannot
erase the way we look,
some people have this
bored look to them, when
the truth is, they are
extremely excited, that
is just how they look,
perhaps if you want to
know something about
someone, you should
go up to them, and
say hello, which is
not always an easy
feat. It can be hard
to talk to anybody
to get past the facade
that might feel as though
it was made of stone
like a robot, much
less than human
might do

Re: If tomorrow never came (User Rating: 1 )
by Wronglyaccused on Saturday, 15th February 2020 @ 09:19:56 AM AEST
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Always hidden meaning behind all your work but very good needless to say.
Muppetman you have said it perfectly.
You can’t fully understand someone opinions or thoughts even if you think you psychic. It needs to come from them.
And people do just blurt things out and no it’s a mistake but don’t care.
And asking someone there thoughts or feelings should be number 1 before jumping to conclusions.
You cant accuse someone of something without solid proof not just in your head. And you can’t expect to trust others when you know your untrustworthy yourself.

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