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on a deep purple parkway
blue cheers out of focus
was playing on the radio
thats when I saw her
she asked if she could ride
and together
into the night we rode

shes a road runner
a modern day rebel rebel
no thought can hold her
there is no way for anyone to reach her level

looking mighty fine
I am so glad we connect
EZ ryding
through crosstown traffic
into a beautiful sunset

I might like her better
if we slept together
but this equal thing we got going on
is so damn clever

I just wanna be her dog
nothing more
nothing less
wag my tail
as she touches with a sweet caress

she is a sweet hitchhiker
I am so happy I met her
she came to me from my dreams
and I knew
I could not keep her

Knowing she could not stay
I watched sadly as she left with a wave
I held back the tears
sighed
and drove away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 99 [topic] => 24 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Deep Purple Parkway

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 9th January 2020 @ 01:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I was space trucking
on a deep purple parkway
blue cheers out of focus
was playing on the radio
thats when I saw her
she asked if she could ride
and together
into the night we rode

shes a road runner
a modern day rebel rebel
no thought can hold her
there is no way for anyone to reach her level

looking mighty fine
I am so glad we connect
EZ ryding
through crosstown traffic
into a beautiful sunset

I might like her better
if we slept together
but this equal thing we got going on
is so damn clever

I just wanna be her dog
nothing more
nothing less
wag my tail
as she touches with a sweet caress

she is a sweet hitchhiker
I am so happy I met her
she came to me from my dreams
and I knew
I could not keep her

Knowing she could not stay
I watched sadly as she left with a wave
I held back the tears
sighed
and drove away.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2020-01-09 13:08:59]
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Re: Deep Purple Parkway (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 11th January 2020 @ 03:39:30 AM AEST
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Great flow. Out of the box for you.
Could be a song. Nice!

Re: Deep Purple Parkway (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th January 2020 @ 12:54:49 AM AEST
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I love this.
Deep Purple
David Bowie
The Weight Band
Jimmie H
I wanna be your dog, Iggy Pop - ( saw David Bowie do it live)
you put a feeling into a compilation.
So you go thinking, in such a way.

Great stuff unknown_utopia
Made a great big smile on my face!

Peace!

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