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[title] => IT/'/S TIME, ITS TIME FOR THE CLIMATE CHANGE RHYME!
[time] => 2019-11-30 06:46:35
[hometext] => This is my latest work. I am having a hell of a lot of trouble with it. The words just won/'/t flow so i thought i might throw it on page, have a break from it and let you all have a read. It will change but I do appreciate any opinions.
[bodytext] => Im thinkin of change,yea climate change,
We have to change but we wont change.
I find that strange, and a bit deranged.
The drought hits deep as the government and sheep,
Watch bushfires reek havoc on nature and peeps!
Beyond dry rivers and the hot, dusty plains.
Mother nature is weeping, this is climate change!
They complain and complain as our rivers they do drain,
For their cotton and cane, causing destruction, pain and strain,
But never will they refrain! This is crazy, its insane!
When greta spoke intensely your tempers flared immensely, ,
Cause she dares to care with empathy,
And speak with knowledge, sensibly.
I tell you now, miscreant government,
Its time you did some governmental governance.
Cause the action your taking now just wont cover it,
This no action action its confusing and a puzzlement !
The australian state of mind where the blind lead the blind,
It/'/s not kind nor refined, thought and prays are so divine...
As you dine on steak and wine!
Im thinkin of change,yea climate change,
We have to change, but we won/'/t change.
I find that strange, and a bit deranged.
Thinking of climate change.
Ya, thinking of climate change (climate change).
Terry West
Copyright 2019
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IT'S TIME, ITS TIME FOR THE CLIMATE CHANGE RHYME!
Contributed by
Redwest802
on
Saturday, 30th November 2019 @ 06:46:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Im thinkin of change,yea climate change,
We have to change but we wont change.
I find that strange, and a bit deranged.
The drought hits deep as the government and sheep,
Watch bushfires reek havoc on nature and peeps!
Beyond dry rivers and the hot, dusty plains.
Mother nature is weeping, this is climate change!
They complain and complain as our rivers they do drain,
For their cotton and cane, causing destruction, pain and strain,
But never will they refrain! This is crazy, its insane!
When greta spoke intensely your tempers flared immensely, ,
Cause she dares to care with empathy,
And speak with knowledge, sensibly.
I tell you now, miscreant government,
Its time you did some governmental governance.
Cause the action your taking now just wont cover it,
This no action action its confusing and a puzzlement !
The australian state of mind where the blind lead the blind,
It/'/s not kind nor refined, thought and prays are so divine...
As you dine on steak and wine!
Im thinkin of change,yea climate change,
We have to change, but we won/'/t change.
I find that strange, and a bit deranged.
Thinking of climate change.
Ya, thinking of climate change (climate change).
Terry West
Copyright 2019
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Redwest802
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Re: IT'S TIME, ITS TIME FOR THE CLIMATE CHANGE RHYME!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2019 @ 03:54:41 AM AEST (User
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A splendid job (even though you claimed to be having trouble). There’s definitely wisdom to be gleaned from here. Rhyme scheme is great and your writing is emotionally charged. A smashing bit of alright,
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Re: IT'S TIME, ITS TIME FOR THE CLIMATE CHANGE RHYME!
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 4th December 2019 @ 07:50:09 PM AEST (User
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good job
well done...... |
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Re: IT'S TIME, ITS TIME FOR THE CLIMATE CHANGE RHYME!
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Wednesday, 4th December 2019 @ 08:09:28 PM AEST (User
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I think it/'/s a great write just the way it is.
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Re: IT'S TIME, ITS TIME FOR THE CLIMATE CHANGE RHYME!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th December 2019 @ 02:15:40 AM AEST (User
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Maybe you simply don/'/t need to "Change" it at all.
I guess we are our biggest critics, when really we should just do what you did here........throw it out to the world and see what comes back.
Steve |
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