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Face clouded
with despair,

Eyes with no one
living there.

Dreams tossed in
a careless pile

Hearts that can
no longer smile.

Souls awash upon
the shore,

Wondering why God
has closed the door.

Living without life
Is easy to do

For I have done it-
my existence through. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 32 [informant] => n2dep2care [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Living Without Life

Contributed by n2dep2care on Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 01:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

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Face clouded
with despair,

Eyes with no one
living there.

Dreams tossed in
a careless pile

Hearts that can
no longer smile.

Souls awash upon
the shore,

Wondering why God
has closed the door.

Living without life
Is easy to do

For I have done it-
my existence through.

Copyright © n2dep2care ... [ 2019-11-26 13:36:22]
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Re: Living Without Life (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 03:56:38 PM AEST
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Jesus.
Another poem with that 1-2 punch at the end.
Some choice lines in here. The last three words make an impact like a body hitting the floor.
I also like the title line and the first and second stanza really stand out.

~Scorp

Re: Living Without Life (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 27th November 2019 @ 05:27:46 AM AEST
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Perfect!

Re: Living Without Life (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 4th December 2019 @ 08:14:41 PM AEST
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This was a beautiful description of what sounds like profound sadness.

Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Living Without Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 7th December 2019 @ 01:17:59 AM AEST
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I can feel your emotion pouring out of this one, almost like you are emptying the chambers of your heart.
Powerful, evocative and moving, just some of the things I have to say about this.
Particularly loved the lines

Dreams tossed in
A careless pile

Bravo!!

Steve

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