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I//'//m a star star
I//'//m not a wandering star
At the centre of it all
Fools gold falls
Alchemical gold
As heir
Lucifer
Lady Lazarus
Rises
Why so serious
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Father

Contributed by alicewhite on Saturday, 9th November 2019 @ 07:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I//'//m a black star
I//'//m a star star
I//'//m not a wandering star
At the centre of it all
Fools gold falls
Alchemical gold
As heir
Lucifer
Lady Lazarus
Rises
Why so serious
The jokers always full of surprises

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Re: Father (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 10th November 2019 @ 05:16:05 AM AEST
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Lady Lazarus....I like that
we enjoy your surprises
keep flowing....

Re: Father (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 15th November 2019 @ 02:42:15 PM AEST
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Well...…………..…..
Honestly, I`m locked up on this one.
The title did that to me.

Re: Father (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th November 2019 @ 03:57:43 AM AEST
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in the spiritual,
of spirituals,
sentient beings,
alive with all
there is,
not any
question
somehow
that one
can be
perplexed
in this so-called
society.
i am not
one of the
herd,
i am not
the first
to follow
any bit
of stardust
from
another
nor the
last to
be feel lost
in disgrace
And I am
just assured
of my own
self mockery
my father
my good
man,
best of friends
but love her
most of all

Peace!

Re: Father (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 17th November 2019 @ 07:41:03 PM AEST
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This is a super cool piece, Alice. It pulls feelings from me that are difficult to grasp. Good poetry does that. Far out!

Invierno

Re: Father (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 20th November 2019 @ 11:51:18 AM AEST
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Sometimes I think it would be fun to sit around a fire with you and sling tales. I would love to hear your mind in action and gain a deeper understanding. I enjoy the way you write things ... and mention of my favourite villain of all time?? Annnnd the why so serious quote..?
Oh behave, Alice, my horns are beginning to show ;)

~Scorp

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