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[title] => F.E.A.R
[time] => 2019-09-14 01:32:28
[hometext] => F.ace E.verything A.nd R.ise/F.orget E.verything A.nd R.un
[bodytext] => Moments become minutes
Minutes become days,
As they crawl
Snowball
Recompense
Consequence
Months flicker and wane
Roiling
Coiling
Burning
Boiling
Antipathy
Fused with insanity.
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F.E.A.R
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Saturday, 14th September 2019 @ 01:32:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Moments become minutes
Minutes become days,
As they crawl
Snowball
Recompense
Consequence
Months flicker and wane
Roiling
Coiling
Burning
Boiling
Antipathy
Fused with insanity.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2019-09-14 01:32:28]
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th September 2019 @ 08:54:02 AM AEST
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very powerfull write.
Blessings
emy |
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th September 2019 @ 09:05:03 PM AEST
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Hey! Stop talking about me like that! 😋
Not sure I understand it but it has me going nuts just reading it. I feel I`ve been in this mode of life, just not from usage.
Great stuff, Scorpendous One!
Me
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 14th September 2019 @ 10:00:55 PM AEST
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Great writing. I/'/ve never been addicted to anything but your words describe the grip of depression as well.
Life can be beautiful for some but a struggle for others. Very compact and powerful. |
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th September 2019 @ 01:03:59 AM AEST
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| I forgot to say that I love the author`s note and title too! |
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th September 2019 @ 05:29:28 AM AEST
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The Truth Shall Make You Free
Aristotle said.
We are brittle and there is no doubt
that life is hard
We wish our animals that we love could
actually talk
We wish even more so that we could
change mental illness
Make the blind someday see
Make the deaf someday hear
do something with our lives
that would someday be
more than good
Make something good
the truth shall make you
free.
Go on girl, go on and run.
The rabbit and its shadow.
John Updike
Peace!
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th September 2019 @ 05:42:57 AM AEST
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sorry, great thought and poem
hauntedscorp
And yeah, it sucks when the
leadership uses it (f.e.a.r.) like a soft whip,
as though there must be a lot
we as individuals do not know
much about / so it takes
someone who is on the spectrum
of autism, who us currently
only sixteen, Greta Thunberg,
and all our crazy wars,
and all the crazy utility of
waste of resource for
profiteering while billions
live a life of poverty
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by Jecks on
Monday, 16th September 2019 @ 12:51:42 PM AEST
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For Everything A Reason
Brevity suits you well. Impressive! |
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 19th September 2019 @ 03:13:03 PM AEST
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This flow seems to crescendo into sadness
thats slowly driving you into madness...
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Re: F.E.A.R
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 21st September 2019 @ 06:36:11 AM AEST
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| I tried to comment on this a while ago but somehow it vanished n i couldnt be bothered to write it all again n now that i think about it i got distracted while searching for the lyrics to the song i knew and know it/'/s by ian brown and he rides his bike in reverse while everyline synchronises through rhyme sucession of words spell fear irst letter at a time |
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