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follow me
and she lead me to the where sea
flows serenely
with a gentle wind blowing

as I got down towards the beach
she grabbed my hand and merged with me
as she talked her words became rainbows
with the colors swirling round and round
and our souls glowing

on a cloud we were drifting
agony screamed in jealousy
misery faded away
hate tried to speak
but that cycle was broken

in suspended animation love vibes and grooves
as we slip into a field of moans
in slow motion
we trip on the elixir
and follow the feeling the wizard has woven

there is nothing like the feeling
of being totally free
where I am in a place
just being me
peacefully existing
as sensual sensations ebbs and flows

the waves of the ocean now speak
whispering serenely and beautifully
the feeling crescendos
pulsing pulsing
then exploding
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Woven World Of The Wizard

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 12th September 2019 @ 06:33:03 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

She said come along
follow me
and she lead me to the where sea
flows serenely
with a gentle wind blowing

as I got down towards the beach
she grabbed my hand and merged with me
as she talked her words became rainbows
with the colors swirling round and round
and our souls glowing

on a cloud we were drifting
agony screamed in jealousy
misery faded away
hate tried to speak
but that cycle was broken

in suspended animation love vibes and grooves
as we slip into a field of moans
in slow motion
we trip on the elixir
and follow the feeling the wizard has woven

there is nothing like the feeling
of being totally free
where I am in a place
just being me
peacefully existing
as sensual sensations ebbs and flows

the waves of the ocean now speak
whispering serenely and beautifully
the feeling crescendos
pulsing pulsing
then exploding

Copyright Â© unknown_utopia ... [ 2019-09-12 06:33:03]
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Re: Woven World Of The Wizard (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 13th September 2019 @ 07:05:03 PM AEST
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That was a read.………..
I love the new direction and I haven/'/t been to that place for years but this year like you I will return.

Many great stanzas here..... color me blown away...…. loved it!

You took control and the world be yours...…….

Re: Woven World Of The Wizard (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 14th September 2019 @ 08:40:04 AM AEST
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Awesome
peace
emy

Re: Woven World Of The Wizard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th November 2020 @ 12:40:14 AM AEST
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// Whoa! I/'/d like to submit into evidence that there is no rambling in this poem. Too cool!

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