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[aid] => mick
[title] => You
[time] => 2019-06-09 14:01:44
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[bodytext] => You send me to the stars
As I count my scars
A love so bold but yet so cold
Your words are a stab in the back
Just another one of your attacks
We sealed our fate with a loving embrace
Our love is always out of place
A tug and a pull
We play each other like fools
In the end, we shall mend
And we will start all over again
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[informant] => jamesstockdale
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[associated] =>
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You
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Sunday, 9th June 2019 @ 02:01:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You send me to the stars
As I count my scars
A love so bold but yet so cold
Your words are a stab in the back
Just another one of your attacks
We sealed our fate with a loving embrace
Our love is always out of place
A tug and a pull
We play each other like fools
In the end, we shall mend
And we will start all over again
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jamesstockdale
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2019-06-09 14:01:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 11th June 2019 @ 12:09:09 AM AEST (User
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Love can become a habit. As you point out so well, it is often easier to stay in a bad relationship than cut the ties that bind us.
Your poem has the ring of hope that perhaps in time it will become the relationship you both hoped it would be.
I love the ending...mending to start all over again.
Haven/'/t we all done that!!
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Re: You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 04:55:31 AM AEST (User
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//Nooooooo !!!! Don`t do it!
No starting over again. Remember our pact? We didn`t make a pact? Okay, we need to make a pact then.
New beginnings!!!
Anywho, partly joking aside, I`m so glad to be able to have some time to read me some ol` J Stockdale. I`m loving it.
Thanks,
Dugan
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