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To record my song from last fall
I thought of all of those no longer here
Those I held close, so dear
My, my, my,
I wish I could get out
Just disappear
Run from here
My legs sank to the floor
My eyes fixated on the door
Life now travels so fast
I have my doubts, how long will I last
I wish I knew the secrets hidden here
How things have changed since last year
My, my, my
I feel the grief in my feet
All those memories are hidden beneath
It was only last year
My, my, my
Now, I`m the only one here [comments] => 6 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jamesstockdale [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My, My, My

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Tuesday, 30th April 2019 @ 01:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I went to the record hall
To record my song from last fall
I thought of all of those no longer here
Those I held close, so dear
My, my, my,
I wish I could get out
Just disappear
Run from here
My legs sank to the floor
My eyes fixated on the door
Life now travels so fast
I have my doubts, how long will I last
I wish I knew the secrets hidden here
How things have changed since last year
My, my, my
I feel the grief in my feet
All those memories are hidden beneath
It was only last year
My, my, my
Now, I`m the only one here

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-04-30 13:03:26]
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Re: My, My, My (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 1st May 2019 @ 06:06:48 PM AEST
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The record hall
is the hall of fame
and
you will be there to be with your loved ones
good flow good poem

Re: My, My, My (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 2nd May 2019 @ 11:52:25 AM AEST
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Our loved ones reside in our memories and as long
as our minds hold out and remember those that we
have lost will live forever. And when our time comes
we will once again be in their company. What a
beautifully written piece.
Thank you for sharing :)

Rich

Re: My, My, My (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 2nd May 2019 @ 10:39:05 PM AEST
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"My, my, my
I feel the grief in my feet"

I love this line....not /'/pain/'/, but /'/grief/'/.

Well done James,

Mike

Re: My, My, My (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th May 2019 @ 03:05:05 AM AEST
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This is sad but really has a great flow. *sigh* The life of a poet.

"Now, I`m the only one here"

That line really hits home for me.

Write it out. They say it helps.

Take care, Jimmy

Timmy

Re: My, My, My (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 03:04:23 PM AEST
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Robert Johnson devil at the crossroads
Because of all of the wonderful things he does

Re: My, My, My (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 01:07:09 AM AEST
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Your words remind me that as my time runs out, it becomes more precious. Our loved ones leave us here and we mourn.
Your poem is the tale of the last man standing. Such is the price we pay for being the late borns.
Let us honor them by living well.
My, my, my.
softerware

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