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to keep things in order
I take a look inside
and decide how I feel,
although there is turmoil
I tell myself there is no danger
got to keep it moving
because
what will be will be.

I often stumble
never do I
walk in a straight line
when I fall
I get back up
pushing the pain
to the back of my mind,
though it is hard to believe
in some of the things that I see
and can only I hope
nothing really bad happens to me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Hope

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 24th April 2019 @ 05:04:47 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I try my best
to keep things in order
I take a look inside
and decide how I feel,
although there is turmoil
I tell myself there is no danger
got to keep it moving
because
what will be will be.

I often stumble
never do I
walk in a straight line
when I fall
I get back up
pushing the pain
to the back of my mind,
though it is hard to believe
in some of the things that I see
and can only I hope
nothing really bad happens to me.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2019-04-24 05:04:47]
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Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 24th April 2019 @ 05:43:30 PM AEST
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Great write. I feel the same as I have no choice.
I stole the lines I heard from the old timers I grew up with. " God, give me strength"

It helps me get through whatever comes my way. Adversity can be your friend if you handle it just right.
Felt the pain in your flow!

Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 24th April 2019 @ 09:20:06 PM AEST
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Counting your blessings. Your poem is a reminder that anytime we falter and can get up and walk away...is a good day.
I don/'/t think any of us can say we WALK IN A STRAIGHT LINE. Living is a crooked road.

You have been fortunate NOTHING REALLY BAD HAPPENS TO ME...Give fate a thank you note: Do something for someone who isn/'/t so lucky.
softerware

Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 2nd May 2019 @ 10:51:13 PM AEST
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So many of these poems weave a common thread. The pain of living. Yours does here. I just posted one, I/'/ve read a great many all woven of the same cloth.

What does that tell us?

Mike

Re: Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Friday, 3rd May 2019 @ 12:48:03 PM AEST
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It has always been in my thoughts that when we fall, we need to try and get up again. At times, we will fall, bad things will happen. Hopefully we learn, we get up, we move on.

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