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She died and wont be coming back.
The devil missed her sure enough.
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Upstairs

Contributed by softerware on Thursday, 11th April 2019 @ 12:37:18 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

The elevator car went black
She died and wont be coming back.
The devil missed her sure enough.
She pushed the button going UP.

Copyright © softerware ... [ 2019-04-11 00:37:18]
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Re: Upstairs (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 11th April 2019 @ 11:09:01 AM AEST
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It/'/s always better to go up than down...
Lovely ...lol

Re: Upstairs (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 11th April 2019 @ 11:53:14 AM AEST
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The devil is relentless but despite that fact his efforts
are always futile. But that futility is solely based on a
decision that our stubborn wills choose to make or
not. We just need to come to the realization that
when the lights go out that final time that if we havent
surrendered our wills and hearts to Christ that it will
be too late. Although death marks the end of our time
on earth...it is the first step of an even greater
journey. I will end my sermon for the day with that
thought.
Sorry if I removed the humor from your poem and
infused it with a dose of spirituality.
You always speak volumes using so few words.
In my honest opinion that is one of your many
abilities as a poet that puts you in the same
arena with many of the greats throughout the
years.

Rich

Re: Upstairs (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 11th April 2019 @ 01:38:35 PM AEST
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Had a little giggle at this one - the devil/'/s in the detail.
One more gem to enthral us.

(p.s. for some unknown reason my posted comments appear twice, though I only posted once(???))

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