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[title] => Changing the Rules
[time] => 2019-03-26 18:52:28
[hometext] => My habits and I are growing old together...
[bodytext] => They say pride goeth before a fall;
But age makes pride a clown.
Content to wait, to goeth late,
Til AFTER I fall down!
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Changing the Rules
Contributed by
softerware
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Tuesday, 26th March 2019 @ 06:52:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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They say pride goeth before a fall;
But age makes pride a clown.
Content to wait, to goeth late,
Til AFTER I fall down!
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Re: Changing the Rules
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 26th March 2019 @ 07:05:18 PM AEST (User
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Pride and age are clowns in the same circus.
From time to time each makes the other to play the
part of the fool. When the time comes that pride
causes age to knock me down I hope I have enough
sense to stay down (lol)
You have yet to produce a piece that does not impress
Rich |
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Re: Changing the Rules
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 27th March 2019 @ 03:21:18 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed your write |
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Re: Changing the Rules
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 30th March 2019 @ 03:29:28 AM AEST (User
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ha ha ha
every time I fall down now
I realize how old I am
ha ha ha |
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Re: Changing the Rules
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Sunday, 31st March 2019 @ 01:20:46 PM AEST (User
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lol cute, but accurate.
Awesome write. :)
~Breezy |
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Re: Changing the Rules
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Sunday, 31st March 2019 @ 01:21:32 PM AEST (User
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lol cute, but accurate.
Awesome write. :)
~Breezy |
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Re: Changing the Rules
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 1st April 2019 @ 02:50:04 PM AEST (User
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So true. If I fall I don/'/t look around to see if I was seen. It/'/s a fall and I own it- no biggie...…..
Yes most often pride is a clown, oh how profound...….. |
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