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It`s about time to go
Sort of sad , hope you know
The hour has come
Wish I wasn`t the one
Undecided but nowhere to run
The doors and windows are cracked open
So when the time has come
My spirit can roam
This is how it`s done
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Going Home

Contributed by Jamesstockdale on Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 01:24:26 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

My bags are packed
It`s about time to go
Sort of sad , hope you know
The hour has come
Wish I wasn`t the one
Undecided but nowhere to run
The doors and windows are cracked open
So when the time has come
My spirit can roam
This is how it`s done
When your final journey is going home

Copyright © Jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-03-19 01:24:26]
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Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 09:30:12 AM AEST
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That/'/s sad, dude. 😨 Choked me up. Great writing when the poet can instill that kind of emotion in the reader.

Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 01:26:50 PM AEST
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How true you are but it can be sad in the same.
I need to continuously keep my things in order
because we never really know because that
flight can depart at any time. When my time comes
I dont want there to be any regrets for anyone.
You definitely have a way with words my friend.

Rich

Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Wednesday, 20th March 2019 @ 04:06:35 PM AEST
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Good poem. Keep up the good work.

Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 21st March 2019 @ 02:20:06 AM AEST
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Sounds like you are prepared James. You have always been organized and a master planner.
I am going to leave my affairs in a mess. That will give everybody something to keep them busy. I am leaving notes tucked everywhere for the event.
We all have to come to an end...I intend to decorate.
Love your concept of leaving the windows open so you can roam.
Look me up. I/'/m bringing a sixpack.
softerware

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