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Array ( [sid] => 185943 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shutdown [time] => 2019-02-28 22:06:24 [hometext] => for mo [bodytext] => Shutdown

Switch on a new life
Load the active brain
Search for a better tomorrow
Chatter the voices speak
Interact the people respond
React a revolution begins
Delete the party has to stop
Reach out we kindle love
Connect embrace the new
Like happy events
Share the knowledge
Enjoy the beautiful
Learn new data entries
Cry it was so short
Shutdown the life ends

By banjosandwitch 28/02/19 for mojosandwitch [comments] => 2 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 73 [informant] => banjosandwitch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Shutdown

Contributed by banjosandwitch on Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 10:06:24 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Shutdown

Switch on a new life
Load the active brain
Search for a better tomorrow
Chatter the voices speak
Interact the people respond
React a revolution begins
Delete the party has to stop
Reach out we kindle love
Connect embrace the new
Like happy events
Share the knowledge
Enjoy the beautiful
Learn new data entries
Cry it was so short
Shutdown the life ends

By banjosandwitch 28/02/19 for mojosandwitch

Copyright © banjosandwitch ... [ 2019-02-28 22:06:24]
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Re: Shutdown (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 2nd March 2019 @ 05:43:14 AM AEST
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Cradle to grave is condensed here for our nod of agreement. Even the end begins with a verb...as you have so cleverly concluded.....even dying is an action.
Our time here is as brief as your write...and I truly wish both were longer to enjoy!

softerware

Re: Shutdown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd March 2019 @ 08:43:16 AM AEST
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man I cried when Gibson left Kalamazoo
back in 1984,
blue grass or rock, more than that,
you don/'/t copy down songs, you play
everybody writes, sometimes only a check
or they just write their name on a contract,
or they just write in essay form
or they just write song
or they just write poem

but it/'/s nice to hear good musicians
play.

it means a lot to the people
Peace!

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