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You made me feel oh so good inside
I thought I might be able to fly
To carry you far, far, away
So high our love would almost reach the sky
Never ever ask why
I was willing to give it a try
We all know how the others tried
So many shed a tear
When you said goodbye
We both know you`re out of my league
Don`t kiss my lips goodbye
Cause baby I`m going to give us a try... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jamesstockdale [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 05:24:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Your beauty took me by surprise
You made me feel oh so good inside
I thought I might be able to fly
To carry you far, far, away
So high our love would almost reach the sky
Never ever ask why
I was willing to give it a try
We all know how the others tried
So many shed a tear
When you said goodbye
We both know you`re out of my league
Don`t kiss my lips goodbye
Cause baby I`m going to give us a try...

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-02-28 17:24:28]
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Re: Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 06:35:58 PM AEST
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A love sonnet that denies failure....after counting all the reasons it won/'/t work.
I love the conclusion in the last two lines:
Otherwise stated: LOOK OUT BABY CAUSE HERE I COME!
It takes one determined partner to make the other one believe. I married one and he/'/s a keeper!
softerware

Re: Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 1st March 2019 @ 03:01:55 AM AEST
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I dig the commitment in these words.

"We both know you`re out of my league"....there is no way more effective in gettin a gal to scoot. Women like men that are not boastful, but also not self-denigrating. The James I read and have grown to enjoy is not, as I envision, a man to denigrate himself so harshly. Never met ya/'/ buddy, but sure as hell would like to. I do know this for certain; you are a good man and have a tender heart. And those two are a one-two punch to getting the right gal for you.

Your friend and admirer,

Mike

Re: Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 1st March 2019 @ 09:17:37 AM AEST
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My favorite type of poetry is love poetry and this without a doubt falls into the favorite category. Great stuff, Mr. Jimmy. Keepa` writin`! 👌

Re: Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 1st March 2019 @ 11:24:32 PM AEST
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who you tryin/'/ to kid buddy ? Cleary if you can write like this I think she might just be in humble awe of you!!

Nice simple, straight forward love poetry
Very well done
Barkeep!! A cold one for my pal
Raker

Re: Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd March 2019 @ 08:54:37 AM AEST
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love is fleeting
but when I think
about love,
and while I am in it
I think about the rain
and each and every
drop that hits against my own
skin.
Love is honest and innocent
like the falling rain
it was designed to be shared.

Peace!

Re: Don`t Kiss My Lips Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 3rd March 2019 @ 06:11:46 PM AEST
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so sweet and happy and hopeful! love it!

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