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These structures i don’t know
Searching for a positive team
Help me please I feel i can try
To be awake in your lightning
Lost wandering in catacombs
Unlocked and truth abandoned
Faking keys will stalk the plea
I’ll meet you at midnight again
I’m cool with my enemy now

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Salty Girl

Contributed by duff on Thursday, 21st February 2019 @ 11:17:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Elevate into strange buildings
These structures i don’t know
Searching for a positive team
Help me please I feel i can try
To be awake in your lightning
Lost wandering in catacombs
Unlocked and truth abandoned
Faking keys will stalk the plea
I’ll meet you at midnight again
I’m cool with my enemy now

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2019-02-21 23:17:05]
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Re: Salty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 22nd February 2019 @ 01:45:09 AM AEST
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Great writing duff. Welcome back my friend. You/'/ve been gone too long! JS...

Re: Salty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 22nd February 2019 @ 04:47:43 AM AEST
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Forgive me. This is one of those poems that I really like, but I can/'/t explain to you why. Like great art, it is over my head. But it is haunting.
I don/'/t mind being lost when the write Is so entertaining!
softerware

Re: Salty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd February 2019 @ 10:27:40 AM AEST
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I second Softy`s comment. I`ve always liked your poems and the way you`re so precise with the length of your lines making them look so even.

Great stuff!!!

Re: Salty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 22nd February 2019 @ 05:10:38 PM AEST
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last line me likeey muchey.

invierno

Re: Salty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 06:39:24 AM AEST
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Theres something about this flow
I like the way it flows
and
makes me think,
thanx for sharing....

Re: Salty Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 30th June 2019 @ 10:41:25 PM AEST
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“Salty Girl” seems like a good last poem for me to comment on ...
Duff knows! ... giggle.

I always dig how you manage to keep a little mystery to every revelation in your writes.
This had me thinking of depression and its many sidekicks that accompany it.
“I’m cool with my enemy now”. ... takes some of that sharp edge away when the enemy can be named. ... Slay that beast

~Scorp

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