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[title] => Burgundy Creek
[time] => 2019-02-07 19:25:46
[hometext] => A Fictional Place That Just Came To Me.
[bodytext] => Whispering willows
Of Burgundy Creek
Where the mellow
Mesh with the meek
Marveled beauty of nature
For whom many come to seek
Wind swept stalks of wheat
Gently rustle as they speak
They call out to the wild
Down the mountain they sweep
The birds and bees
High and low in the trees
They too yearn for the call
Summer is now gone
Time to ready for the Fall
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Burgundy Creek
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 07:25:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Whispering willows
Of Burgundy Creek
Where the mellow
Mesh with the meek
Marveled beauty of nature
For whom many come to seek
Wind swept stalks of wheat
Gently rustle as they speak
They call out to the wild
Down the mountain they sweep
The birds and bees
High and low in the trees
They too yearn for the call
Summer is now gone
Time to ready for the Fall
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jamesstockdale
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2019-02-07 19:25:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 08:19:03 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful piece. Makes me wish that I lived in the
country miles from anyone. Where the saying
"Silence is golden" takes on new meaning. The whole
piece flows so wonderfully like a mountain stream
running through a serene forest.
I really enjoyed this very much, Thank you for sharing
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 8th February 2019 @ 02:01:20 AM AEST (User
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Sounds like a wonderful place.
You have created a paradise to retreat to, and the best part is, you have let us all come with you!
I/'/m going to come back and read this again. Nice to know there are still places like Burgundy Creek; unspoiled and awaiting our imaginations!
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 8th February 2019 @ 03:17:29 AM AEST (User
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I envision the marshes and valleys that I pass every time I travel upstate to see relatives for the holidays. A wonderful sight indeed. Beautiful work here,
Deidra |
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tiny_Tina on
Friday, 8th February 2019 @ 10:28:17 AM AEST (User
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This is so pretty.
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th February 2019 @ 05:34:26 AM AEST (User
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This, my friend, is a perfect poem about nature and its seasons. Very beautiful.
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 9th February 2019 @ 06:01:21 AM AEST (User
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oh please take me there
this is so good..... |
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 16th February 2019 @ 01:49:31 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this a lot. really like the lines "Where the mellow
Mesh with the meek" it flows really nicely |
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Re: Burgundy Creek
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Monday, 1st April 2019 @ 08:17:26 PM AEST (User
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I`ll always have a soft spot for good nature poetry and you should be proud of this one. Very visual and flows freely. I hear the call! |
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