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Intelligent
Civilized
modern day and age
the belief
in commonsense
logical reasoning
has now become deleted
and there it stays
for if it/'/s not a theory
it/'/s not believed
within our
sophisticated system
that we breed

The theory of democracy
where only paid actors
are allowed to play
the game of paying justice
to look the other way
the theory of believing
that only theory/'/s
know the truth
within the theory/'/s
that we cling to

when it rains
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Contributed by drone on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 12:12:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

In our
Intelligent
Civilized
modern day and age
the belief
in commonsense
logical reasoning
has now become deleted
and there it stays
for if it/'/s not a theory
it/'/s not believed
within our
sophisticated system
that we breed

The theory of democracy
where only paid actors
are allowed to play
the game of paying justice
to look the other way
the theory of believing
that only theory/'/s
know the truth
within the theory/'/s
that we cling to

when it rains

Copyright © drone ... [ 2019-02-07 12:12:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Deleted (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 06:43:28 PM AEST
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Your poem testifies to our mistrust of change.
To embrace the new, we must let go of the old. Having created the old, we are too invested to abandon it.
Your poem reminds us that progress begins with theory.
We are at the top of the food chain because we question reality.
At least...that is my theory!
softerware

Re: Deleted (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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I agree 100% softerware.
like the quote from Terminator 2 "The future/'/s not set. There is not fate but what we make for ourselves." We as human beings do not like change. We are dead set in our ways. Change is but a theory that unless we have some way of proving that it will work out for the better...we want nothing to do with it.
Great piece of writing.
Rich

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