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Array ( [sid] => 90657 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Souls [time] => 2005-04-11 19:04:28 [hometext] => A lot of thought went into this one. Comments &/or votes would be deeply appreciated. [bodytext] => I know what my soul is…


It’s a tangle of reflections.
A quietness that one can feel.
Something said automatically.
Something longing to be real.

I know what your soul is…

It’s like nothing I’ve ever known.
A shadow dancer on the wall.
A little lopsided smile,
That’s better than no smile at all.

It’s a beautiful pleasant silence,
A poem, written on the wind.
A wild horse that races the sky,
A very lopsided grin.

I know what our soul is…

It’s a breath. A prayer of thanks.
A spark…A single beating heart.
A match that burns forever,
A single soul, not once apart.

An electric piece of mind,
A conversation that knows how to last.
It’s the butterflies in our stomachs,
A leftover, but beautiful, laugh.

A bath of intense heat,
A very solid, gripping stare.
One soul dwelling in two bodies.
A lit fire love, that we both share. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => JacobsKK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 45 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Souls

Contributed by JacobsKK on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:04:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I know what my soul is…


It’s a tangle of reflections.
A quietness that one can feel.
Something said automatically.
Something longing to be real.

I know what your soul is…

It’s like nothing I’ve ever known.
A shadow dancer on the wall.
A little lopsided smile,
That’s better than no smile at all.

It’s a beautiful pleasant silence,
A poem, written on the wind.
A wild horse that races the sky,
A very lopsided grin.

I know what our soul is…

It’s a breath. A prayer of thanks.
A spark…A single beating heart.
A match that burns forever,
A single soul, not once apart.

An electric piece of mind,
A conversation that knows how to last.
It’s the butterflies in our stomachs,
A leftover, but beautiful, laugh.

A bath of intense heat,
A very solid, gripping stare.
One soul dwelling in two bodies.
A lit fire love, that we both share.




Copyright © JacobsKK ... [ 2005-04-11 19:04:28]
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Re: Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:26:54 PM AEST
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Very deep write....which says so much...
Well captured..
Jenni


Re: Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:18:02 AM AEST
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Awesomly beautifull masterpeice
hugs,
emy


Re: Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:20:18 PM AEST
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this is a great poem I think and makes me wonder how much more we would appreciate each other if we could see past the hard surface of others and observe the soul. I think if we could do that than we would cease to misunderstand and hurt one another. Anyways I liked the poem very much. take care , doug




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