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[title] => Confinement
[time] => 2005-03-13 12:28:57
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[bodytext] => The rain falls softly as i look for a way out of the fence that stands before me...i'm trapped in a world where no one cares..i'm trapped in a world which i cannot bear...accusations of murder and distrust are all around me..confining me to a place with negative thoughts..for this is not what i sought out to find...i thought it would help me clear my mind...of the other things that made me hurt..of the other things that made me feel unsure...but maybe the better things are in a place far away..a place where dreams safely lay
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Confinement
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whispered_cries
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The rain falls softly as i look for a way out of the fence that stands before me...i'm trapped in a world where no one cares..i'm trapped in a world which i cannot bear...accusations of murder and distrust are all around me..confining me to a place with negative thoughts..for this is not what i sought out to find...i thought it would help me clear my mind...of the other things that made me hurt..of the other things that made me feel unsure...but maybe the better things are in a place far away..a place where dreams safely lay
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Re: Confinement
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:59:05 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this so much...more then usual today...i love this. thanks for posting it. |
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Re: Confinement
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:19:14 PM AEST
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| Hey your writing was really good and amazing. I enjoyed it. You should read mine and rate me. |
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