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Array ( [sid] => 87340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Candle [time] => 2005-03-13 12:59:30 [hometext] => I don't know yet who it's to, or who it's from. Or if either are me. [bodytext] => yeah, so
last we talked

you were
closer to dragons
{I wonder if
you learned to scream [right]}
than ever before

you swore you'd tell me
when
you found your wings
{I wonder how
>>the sky broke}

I screamed for you,
you know?

(thanks for replying
with
the [proper] words)

it would have been --- - - - brighter
(but you knew that)

had you let me
dream it rugged
and more [foreign] than
your perfect replica.

{I guess you'll never know your name ...} [comments] => 6 [counter] => 730 [topic] => 39 [informant] => ShadowDaughter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Last Candle

Contributed by ShadowDaughter on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:59:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

yeah, so
last we talked

you were
closer to dragons
{I wonder if
you learned to scream [right]}
than ever before

you swore you'd tell me
when
you found your wings
{I wonder how
>>the sky broke}

I screamed for you,
you know?

(thanks for replying
with
the [proper] words)

it would have been --- - - - brighter
(but you knew that)

had you let me
dream it rugged
and more [foreign] than
your perfect replica.

{I guess you'll never know your name ...}

Copyright Â© ShadowDaughter ... [ 2005-03-13 12:59:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Last Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:49:31 PM AEST
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An intruiging write. Thought-provoking and original. Thanks for sharing. :o)

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Last Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:28:52 AM AEST
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Since I don’t know whom this is for, I’ll just comment on it on a regular thesis.

Although I don’t get it much I thought you’ve displayed such a nice way of expressing your anger/frustration to this person.

I really do like the way you write Nora it’s fascinatingly original and fresh and it’s beyond my comprehension on how you do it, but I praise you on a great write.

Jane^_^
(Who really adores Nora's poems)

Re: Last Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:46:16 PM AEST
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cryptic, but not without strong emotion.
You do so well at saying much with little, both in meaning and feelings....great job Nora!

Re: Last Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:29:16 PM AEST
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wow nora, how intriguing.. i love poetry like this.. makes your mind wander and wonder.. wonderful..
charlotte xxx

Re: Last Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:21:25 AM AEST
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Interesting write

Re: Last Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by ravensofthedark on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:01:01 PM AEST
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i thought it was awesome but i didn't really understand all the paranthasis(?) but nice job

dont need a message

~The Raven

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