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but, what good would it do?
Still no happiness for me
just satisfaction for you
You lead me on without trying
I follow far behind
Lost in the confusion
The fault here is all mine
I've lied to myself
I've cared for my own wounds
I create these illusions
The truth surfaced too soon
You have a cold heart
Yet you make my heart beat
There's a hole here inside
Where you make me complete
To you I'm just a girl
I fall inline with the rest
Out of all who have hurt me
You did the job best
Now I lay down broken
And you don't even know
I wait here to die
Still my heart won't let go [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 48 [informant] => girlg0newrong [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Cold Heart

Contributed by girlg0newrong on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:07:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I could beg and I could cry
but, what good would it do?
Still no happiness for me
just satisfaction for you
You lead me on without trying
I follow far behind
Lost in the confusion
The fault here is all mine
I've lied to myself
I've cared for my own wounds
I create these illusions
The truth surfaced too soon
You have a cold heart
Yet you make my heart beat
There's a hole here inside
Where you make me complete
To you I'm just a girl
I fall inline with the rest
Out of all who have hurt me
You did the job best
Now I lay down broken
And you don't even know
I wait here to die
Still my heart won't let go

Copyright © girlg0newrong ... [ 2004-12-22 21:07:42]
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Re: Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:21:37 PM AEST
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I know that feeling. I carry it all the time. Good write....keep ot up.

Re: Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:47:04 PM AEST
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this was an amazing write. it looks like a lot of effort was put into this and it paid off well. there is something about this write that sets it apart from a lot that i have read and i guess it is because of your style and diction. this wasnt a chore to read, it was a joy to read. sometimes we need to let go to hold on to something else.....

Re: Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by biggredd on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:27:12 PM AEST
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I am really glad that i took the time to read your poem. I feel the same way you do, I just regret not being the one to not say it first. I really like how you used a lot of emotion. I am sorry that this had to happen to you, you obviously deserve better. Please, keep up the exquisite work!

Bigg Redd

Re: Cold Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 07:21:40 AM AEST
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Its really sad when you love someone and they don't love you back. Just a one sided love. It isn't fair for you , I hope your strong to move on with your life. You deserve more..
A very emotional poem , nicely written..take care

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