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Ease My Pain
Contributed by
shena_bean
on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:18:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The Blood Runs Down Slowly As I Ease My Pain
I Am Filled With Hurt And Anger
Does Anyone Realize What I Have Done?
Do They Care?
I Feel Like I Am Just A Fragile Soul Lost In This Dark Cold World
Trying To Find My Way
Trying To Make It Through Life
I Have Made It This Far
But I Just Can't Take It Anymore
The Fights And Arguments
The Sadness And Anger
The Hurting And Pain
Why Is The World Like This?
So Violent And Harsh
Why Not Joyous And Happy?
Why Not Full Of Fun And Laughter?
One Day This May Become
I'm Not Sure If I'll Be Here When It Does
But Until Then I Will Just Sit Here
Sit And Watch The Blood Run Down Slowly As I Ease My Pain
Copyright ©
shena_bean
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2004-11-12 10:18:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ease My Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:28:59 AM AEST (User
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a very sad write,expressed well *hugs* hope you can smile about your life one day,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Ease My Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:44:08 PM AEST (User
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Not much depth here other then some form of teen angst |
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Re: Ease My Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:07:04 PM AEST (User
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great write. has great potential. |
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