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that look I had?
the way the crowd seemed to vanish?
how it was you and I?
no interuptions, no worries, nobody...
remember when you said forever?
Our forever?
how my heart skipped a beat?
Of course you dont!
cause you dont care... you never did...
you left without a word
no warning
no words
nothing....
what happened? what went wrong? what can I do?....
to get our forever back?... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 303 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Our forever

Contributed by holderofthestone on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:24:37 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Remember when we first met?
that look I had?
the way the crowd seemed to vanish?
how it was you and I?
no interuptions, no worries, nobody...
remember when you said forever?
Our forever?
how my heart skipped a beat?
Of course you dont!
cause you dont care... you never did...
you left without a word
no warning
no words
nothing....
what happened? what went wrong? what can I do?....
to get our forever back?...

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Re: Our forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:14:59 AM AEST
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great write, your not alone though, my last forever also took a hike, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Our forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:38:31 AM AEST
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So did mine, but in time, you discover they did care, just not forever... But that's beside the point. A good poem everyone in the world can probably relate to...

Re: Our forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:41:13 AM AEST
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Very truly expressed and accurately emoted.
Well done. I really enjoyed it.

Re: Our forever (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:16:59 PM AEST
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This Is Another Sad Write Holder !!!! My Ex B/F Left Me Not To Long Ago When I Told Him I Had Cancer !!! Yeah He Just Up & Left Without Even Saying Bye So Don't Feel Bad Love Hurts To A Certain Point ... But I Found True Love !! Someone Who Really Does Love Me & Stays Right With Me !!! So Will You Just Hang Tuff Holder It Will Get Better Soon !!!!!!!
Hugs , Love & God Bless :-)
LoVe - AnGeL

Re: Our forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:08:11 AM AEST
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wow, anger is presented in thie poem...very sad I liked it though...but you know we all go through it...well I know I did I am and it sux...I will do nothing cuz it obviously wanst meant to be...well if he comes back then he does...Im always gonna feel the same way about him...
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo

Re: Our forever (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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nice write, you have someone who loves you without question. you have to let people like that go, if they don't want to be there, they won't be happy. good job. 3 stars

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