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just another soul

Contributed by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:03:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems























like a bird who fell out of the sky
sitting on his feathery butt wondering why,
i would like to know why it tis that
my love is never quite where i am at,

like a lonely star reaching for the sun
impossible and ne'er ever done,
a quest around again and again
a dance that is over before it began,

where waterfalls flow in an uphill stream
alas, that is my love, only a dream,
lost memories of times gone by
tears lost in rain when i cry,

like coffee shops on unending streets
love lives in my every heartbeat,
just another soul wondering why
with broken wings i cannot fly.

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Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:42:58 AM AEST
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I really really love the flow on this....i stand and applaud,Well Done LadyFawn Well Done....

The Wind


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:43:30 AM AEST
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I really really love the flow on this....i stand and applaud,Well Done LadyFawn Well Done....

The Wind


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:40:26 AM AEST
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well written...awww but with broken wings we do fly...we just have to find the right wind to hold us up

Shari


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:42:25 AM AEST
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Aww...Nessa this is so sad. I have felt this way before too so many times. But I have no doubts that someone as kind and gracious as yourself will find your true love in good time. This poem depicted your emotions so well. A lovely write that hit close to home. :))


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:30:25 AM AEST
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Really nice and iris is the right flower for it - but maybe one iris alone...


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:56:45 AM AEST
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Many birds fall out of the sky most of them manage somehow to get back on the wing. Lovely poem full marks from bernard.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:44:25 PM AEST
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just a wonderful piece of writing. i loved every word.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:05:36 PM AEST
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"Twould never have known love
if I had not received
Twould never have known grief
if no one hurt me
There is a paradox
that I often quite miss
I have to learn to love in spite of this
What proves me a friend is not good times spent
but sending my blessing in hard times bent
For when we lift up the people who have fallen to the ground
it makes life better for all of us around"

You are already good at doing that. Your poem is a reminder that all people struggle from the most selfish to the most giving. Thanks for being in the giving catagory.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:25:33 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa,
this is so lovely yet sad are you ok??
Michelle


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by ThePumpkinKing on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:32:54 PM AEST
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im in your boat right now, i feel the same way...this was a excellent write, so sad...but a very good read...much love...Ev


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:44:52 PM AEST
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nessa, what can I say. I am both touched and impressed.
You seem to have a good soul. Its mate will be so lucky when it finds you. :)
very well written.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:29:29 PM AEST
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Sad but a lovely peice! I hope your doing well.
Christina


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:38:18 PM AEST
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In your usual unique beautiful flow as only you can do, you have both touched and made me question life and love. You always inspire me, Nessa.

Rita


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:04:55 AM AEST
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Great write..very well written...hugs my friend: venkat


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:51:14 AM AEST
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I keep asking these questions as well Nessa ... but, I believe that true love will find you one day ... beautiful write ... hugs Jan


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:09:25 AM AEST
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Truly beautiful. I'm at a loss for words, imagine that.
Lovewriter


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:46:28 PM AEST
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This a beautiful poem questioning of love. I adore this poem because it really makes me think deeper into the meanings.

Kisses,
~Soulless~


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by jaavys on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:51:06 AM AEST
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hola ladyfawn, it's an excellent write, did it ever occur to you that one of your voice could be me?


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:34:42 PM AEST
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Oh Ness..this is so sad. It reminded me of my poem, Broken Wings..but I know you will soar again..soon...
You heart is too full of love not to...
Hugs and luv,
Jenni


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:39:37 PM AEST
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So beautiful, I found myself reading it over and over. awesome picture to go with an awesome poem.
Andy


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:40:41 AM AEST
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It is a great expression heart felt sad feeling with great imagery..thanks for sharing your excellent poem. K


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:48:57 AM AEST
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great write. touching piece. tugs on the heart
-jt-


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:00:01 PM AEST
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oh nessa.. this is so damn beautiful.. so sad but so good..
charlotte xxx


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:31:17 AM AEST
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There's a time and a place for everything to take place under the sun, my friend. We can not determine, 'tis not our job.....'tis our job to wonder why? But never to give up and end!
Your day will come dear friend.....just you wait and see......there's someone out there for you, and maybe even me????
Your poetry is always so inspiring Nessa. You read it over and over now.....it will help you also
Love
Consue


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:41:30 PM AEST
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Nessa,
Very touching write.

Hugs,

Bruce


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:57:31 PM AEST
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Achingly beautiful. The opening and closing lines are just perfection. Lovely, lovely write!


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:15:31 AM AEST
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This is so lovely Nessa, so sad and emotional. I especially like this stanza

"where waterfalls flow in an uphill stream
alas, that is my love, only a dream,
lost memories of times gone by
tears lost in rain when i cry,"

Exellent poem as always, and don't worry, broken wings always heal xxx

Love Dawny x


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:52:42 PM AEST
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This one is so well written i almost drifted into it......refreshing to feel again

Silent


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:48:47 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful maam...And your words show just how high your soul does fly!...Russ


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:25:40 AM AEST
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A very powerful and heart breaking write Nessa. You write with such beauty even in sadness.


Roses
Larry


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by peixoto on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:36:48 AM AEST
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I love your poetry. Thanks for sharing it. It really talks straight to the heart. All the BEST for you.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:06:40 PM AEST
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a very touching write - sounds like you might be feeling a bit blue - you will fly again and not only fly but soar.............

hugs sis

Merry


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:28:07 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem...I can relate to this musing...
Hugs,
Hur


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:36:07 PM AEST
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THAT WAS A VERY PRETTY POEM! IT HAD SO MUCH MEANING TO IT!! YOU ARE TRUELY A GREAT WRITER L/F !!!
LOL~DAN!!!!


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:29:56 PM AEST
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Oh, Ness! I'm sorry I missed this one when it was new, but it is a beauty and I'm glad I found it...

huggles muchly mom... and it will be more than a dream some day, and far less than reality.....


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:48:32 AM AEST
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A bit sad but written beautifully.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:13:31 PM AEST
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<~~~last to comment yet again! Forgive me!
My wing is on the mend, but Nessa? I have strength to carry us both! Your one wing and my one wing,Heck girlfriend, we can SOAR!!! :-)
Hope you are well....
Angel always.....godspeed my friend...joni


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:41:05 PM AEST
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beautiful beyond words. this was so perfectly written. filled with emotion and great saddness. words cant express how good and wonderful this write is.
i loved this.
Arden


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:34:54 PM AEST
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Nessa, Your soul blinds me, with all that love you won't be lonely for long.:)


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:22:44 PM AEST
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Awwwww hun! This is beautiful - I love it and can definitly see why you and your poetry are such a big hit :D gentle words for a gentle soul.

Big Hugs 'n Love
- Becca


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:46:36 PM AEST
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so sad indeed. I hope you can heal your wonderous wings and fly away to the arms of your love. This poem made me cry, no joke, it was very indeering and easy to provoke my true heartshed for your emotions. hang in there, this was precious.

brandon


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:11:07 PM AEST
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you truly are a great poet, gifted in speaking from the heart.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:57:21 PM AEST
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On the wings of love a broken wing can heal.
Sending you loving wishes to hope yours heals soon

Another beautiful write so glad i stopped by to browse through your fine poetry

Love Sweetangelukxxxx



Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:48:52 PM AEST
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beautiful your such a wonderful writer

l3xxi3


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by SnowB on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:58:53 AM AEST
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"a dance that is over before it began"

This line jumped out at me as soon as I read it...so sad .... beautifully penned...wonderful poem.

Lena


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:56:37 AM AEST
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Very powerful and heart moving poem..excellent and stunning..
I like your great expression..:o) K


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:19:44 AM AEST
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just lovely


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 09:44:44 PM AEST
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That is some real emotion you put into this. Good flow, good imagery... I like.


Re: just another soul (User Rating: 1 )
by sunshiny on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:54:20 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem. I feel this way quite often and can really relate to it. I hope that one day, you will find the love you are looking for.


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by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:22:25 PM AEST
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quite simply superb.

-phil




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