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Array ( [sid] => 325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => After all, That's the Way God Intended It to Be [time] => 2002-07-13 19:37:37 [hometext] => Even though God takes the people who mean most to us away, he will make it better again. [bodytext] =>

I need you in my life,
Like a flower needs the rain,
But God took you away,
And now my heart is slowly wilting,
And soon there will be nothing left.

That bright sunny day when you left to walk above,
My tears fell like rain,
As my tears streamed down my face,
They washed my hope and dreams away.

I hoped to see your smile,
Light up a room one more time,
And dreamed of all the happiness,
Would one day cover your pain.

But alas,
All the hopes and dreams flew swiftly out the window,
Soon after God chose you to leave.

But little did I know,
That even though God took you away,
He would make my life better,
By sending me down an angel,
Who will stay by my side forever.

Now your hard working hands are put to rest,
But your soul will forever be,
Right by my side,
After all, that’s the way God intended it to be.
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After all, That's the Way God Intended It to Be

Contributed by Kassidi on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:37:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I need you in my life,
Like a flower needs the rain,
But God took you away,
And now my heart is slowly wilting,
And soon there will be nothing left.

That bright sunny day when you left to walk above,
My tears fell like rain,
As my tears streamed down my face,
They washed my hope and dreams away.

I hoped to see your smile,
Light up a room one more time,
And dreamed of all the happiness,
Would one day cover your pain.

But alas,
All the hopes and dreams flew swiftly out the window,
Soon after God chose you to leave.

But little did I know,
That even though God took you away,
He would make my life better,
By sending me down an angel,
Who will stay by my side forever.

Now your hard working hands are put to rest,
But your soul will forever be,
Right by my side,
After all, that’s the way God intended it to be.

Copyright Â© Kassidi ... [ 2002-07-13 19:37:37]
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Re: After all, That's the Way God Intended It to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 11:50:12 PM AEST
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You write with a great deal of feeling Kassidi...this is very sad and I'm so sorry for your loss.
Chrisse x

Re: After all, That's the Way God Intended It to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Kate on Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 06:46:35 AM AEST
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Kassidi this poem was so sad. I am also sorry for your loss Kate

Re: After all, That's the Way God Intended It to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Silverwings on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 04:29:38 PM AEST
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That was a beautiful poem. It's so sad, yet beautiful in formation!

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