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[title] => Seven seas and Single Dreams
[time] => 2019-03-27 07:45:23
[hometext] => Nature in an imaginative way
[bodytext] => //The sun is slowly rising
Cautiously observing
Earth/'/s call and outward reach
Whispers too; and loving each
Emerald hills off dancing
Indigo waves up leaping
Standing army of shelter trees
With a keep of avian beneath
Ruby beams gleaming
Through pool aquamarine
Dazzling /'/pon diamond peaks
And their rosened snow with bright sheen
Writhing rivers and curving creeks
Like cold snakes/'/ birthing breach
Saphire siphons for bears to teach
Far from seven seas this single dream
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Seven seas and Single Dreams
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xHeathenx
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Wednesday, 27th March 2019 @ 07:45:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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//The sun is slowly rising
Cautiously observing
Earth/'/s call and outward reach
Whispers too; and loving each
Emerald hills off dancing
Indigo waves up leaping
Standing army of shelter trees
With a keep of avian beneath
Ruby beams gleaming
Through pool aquamarine
Dazzling /'/pon diamond peaks
And their rosened snow with bright sheen
Writhing rivers and curving creeks
Like cold snakes/'/ birthing breach
Saphire siphons for bears to teach
Far from seven seas this single dream
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Re: Seven seas and Single Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 30th March 2019 @ 03:10:26 AM AEST (User
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well done had me imagining the landscape |
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Re: Seven seas and Single Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 1st April 2019 @ 02:47:32 PM AEST (User
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Back to nature-great flow and jive....Very soothing piece Beto, I mean Heathen...……….
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Re: Seven seas and Single Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 08:37:23 PM AEST (User
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A stellar portrayal of the way creative writers and storytellers see the world.
STANDING ARMY OF SHELTER TREES. Only a poet would see a forest as an army at the ready.
Your visionary spirit dances all over your description of nature, proving that we all see the same world, and bestowing upon us the gift of seeing it in another dimension.
A delight.
softerware
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Re: Seven seas and Single Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Monday, 16th September 2019 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST (User
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You/'/ve got some great imagery and wordplay in this.
A very vivid piece! |
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