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[title] => Stormy Seas
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[bodytext] => Stormy seas
Our only reason to be
The ebb and flow
Of the tide
Mimic the world of you and I
Our worlds always seem to collide
Only with the calming of the sea
Can we ever commence to be
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Stormy Seas
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 03:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stormy seas
Our only reason to be
The ebb and flow
Of the tide
Mimic the world of you and I
Our worlds always seem to collide
Only with the calming of the sea
Can we ever commence to be
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2019-02-24 15:42:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Stormy Seas
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 10:30:24 PM AEST (User
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Good little poem here, James. Life is indeed a series of ebbs and tides. How we roll with them defines the quality of our life.
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Re: Stormy Seas
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Monday, 25th February 2019 @ 02:23:28 AM AEST (User
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There is something beautiful and terrifying about the ocean that can relate to our daily lives. Calm and chaotic. Nice work man. |
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Re: Stormy Seas
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th February 2019 @ 11:15:11 PM AEST (User
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Love the analogies. Definitely can relate!
Keepa writin`, Jimmy!
Timmy
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Re: Stormy Seas
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 26th February 2019 @ 02:28:46 PM AEST (User
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The ocean is the perfect physical description of our
lives. Whenever we reach a "calm" one thing that
we have to always remember is that is only the "eye"
of the storm. It is just a brief time given to us for us
to catch our breath before getting hit again. Life is
chock full of double whammies. Great piece my friend
So much said in so few words.
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Re: Stormy Seas
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 08:16:58 AM AEST (User
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There is beautiful balance in the oceans cycles and our own. And as others point out, calm and turmoil as well.
Your verse leaves me wondering what life would be like if we could truly control it?
Perhaps we poor mortals would just make a bigger mess much faster!
Romance was not meant to be ours to steer. And I so enjoyed the oceanic swells of your lovely and wise words here spoken. softerware! |
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Re: Stormy Seas
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st March 2019 @ 03:09:15 AM AEST (User
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So full of emotions!! Something about the sea that can make you feel so many different ways. |
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