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Array ( [sid] => 174447 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Soul Speaking to My Heart [time] => 2012-12-02 18:49:06 [hometext] => One sided conversation between my soul and my heart [bodytext] => Just shut up and stop your crying,
Quit walking around here like you are dying.
I'm tired of always wiping your tears,
We've done this song and dance for years.

Get your sorry butt up out of the bed,
Stop lying around here acting dead.
You need to get up and get dressed,
This doesn't lead down the path of success.

So what your going through some pain,
You've been here before it's all the same.
Stop crying about what you thought you had,
Before you see me when I'm really mad.

There's plenty of them out there for you and me,
What is they say about the fish in the sea?
All of this because she doesn't love you back,
Man you're gonna give yourself a heart attack.

You know I am your closest friend,
No matter what i am here till the very end.
If she comes back I'll be happy for you,
And if she doesn't then I'll get you through.

You and I are in this for the long haul,
For God's sake we're roommates after all.
Let's get out of here and get us a drink,
Maybe a Bloody Marry, what do you think? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mchall629 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
My Soul Speaking to My Heart

Contributed by mchall629 on Sunday, 2nd December 2012 @ 06:49:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Just shut up and stop your crying,
Quit walking around here like you are dying.
I'm tired of always wiping your tears,
We've done this song and dance for years.

Get your sorry butt up out of the bed,
Stop lying around here acting dead.
You need to get up and get dressed,
This doesn't lead down the path of success.

So what your going through some pain,
You've been here before it's all the same.
Stop crying about what you thought you had,
Before you see me when I'm really mad.

There's plenty of them out there for you and me,
What is they say about the fish in the sea?
All of this because she doesn't love you back,
Man you're gonna give yourself a heart attack.

You know I am your closest friend,
No matter what i am here till the very end.
If she comes back I'll be happy for you,
And if she doesn't then I'll get you through.

You and I are in this for the long haul,
For God's sake we're roommates after all.
Let's get out of here and get us a drink,
Maybe a Bloody Marry, what do you think?




Copyright © mchall629 ... [ 2012-12-02 18:49:06]
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Re: My Soul Speaking to My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd December 2012 @ 09:27:00 PM AEST
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Very creative writing and awesomely unique.
I like the the whole concept of this write.
Smiles, blessings,
emy



Re: My Soul Speaking to My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Tuesday, 4th December 2012 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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Very creative, indeed. I especially liked the ending of asking for a drink - definitely sounds like a conversation my insides have had before. Very nice concept, I enjoyed reading this piece.

-Everette


Re: My Soul Speaking to My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 7th December 2012 @ 06:04:48 AM AEST
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I also very much liked the concept of your poetry,a wonderfully human approach to dealing with the awfulness of matters of the heart,displaying vulnerability and therefore connecting with others and bringing a warm smile of recognition.


Re: My Soul Speaking to My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 4th February 2013 @ 07:14:55 AM AEST
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This poem made me laugh out loud. Probably because I have had to tell friends (and myself) pretty much the exact same thing. SO VERY TRUE! :)




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