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Array ( [sid] => 139588 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love...isn't a tragedy ! [time] => 2008-01-04 17:04:35 [hometext] => I M JST TIRED OF PPL DEPISCTING LOVE S SORROWFUL N SAD ..I THINK LOVE IS ADVENTEROUS N XCITING N DIS IS WAT DIS POEM SAYS [bodytext] => It ws love...
that made me cry
and shed those salty tears
it broke my heart into a 100 pieces
the pain...i knew would continue 4 years

but then it did somethng else
it gave me new wings , broad and strong
to flt , to escape , to break free
to raise myself above the throng

OOOOOh...it glowed in my heart
it shone n sparkled in my eyes
the magic of it flew in my veins
my heart echoed with joyful cries

and i realized ...love isn't a tragedy !
it's a power ... a medicine
it gives u hope , it makes u dream
even in d deepest of depressions , it breaks out a grin

love is naughty....love is daring
love ditinguishes nt good or bad
oh yes ! it makes u blind
for it's d power u thot u nvr had

love is d touch u feel
on misty damp winter days
it's d warmth that races thru u
as those fingers feeel like glowing sun rays

LOVE IS D HUG U GET
WEN U R CRYING....ALONE N SAD
IT'S D EMOTION DT FILLS UR HERT
AND VANISHES ALL D PAINS U'VE EVER HAD

o yes ! love's mad...
it's crazy , insane , blind
it makes ur heart go wold
n takes sense away 4m ur mind

but dont be wary of it
jump into it....wenever u feel d need
for in the world ...dis world is held up..
.....by love indeed
.....by love indeed !
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 14 [informant] => akshay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

love...isn't a tragedy !

Contributed by akshay on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 05:04:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

It ws love...
that made me cry
and shed those salty tears
it broke my heart into a 100 pieces
the pain...i knew would continue 4 years

but then it did somethng else
it gave me new wings , broad and strong
to flt , to escape , to break free
to raise myself above the throng

OOOOOh...it glowed in my heart
it shone n sparkled in my eyes
the magic of it flew in my veins
my heart echoed with joyful cries

and i realized ...love isn't a tragedy !
it's a power ... a medicine
it gives u hope , it makes u dream
even in d deepest of depressions , it breaks out a grin

love is naughty....love is daring
love ditinguishes nt good or bad
oh yes ! it makes u blind
for it's d power u thot u nvr had

love is d touch u feel
on misty damp winter days
it's d warmth that races thru u
as those fingers feeel like glowing sun rays

LOVE IS D HUG U GET
WEN U R CRYING....ALONE N SAD
IT'S D EMOTION DT FILLS UR HERT
AND VANISHES ALL D PAINS U'VE EVER HAD

o yes ! love's mad...
it's crazy , insane , blind
it makes ur heart go wold
n takes sense away 4m ur mind

but dont be wary of it
jump into it....wenever u feel d need
for in the world ...dis world is held up..
.....by love indeed
.....by love indeed !

Copyright © akshay ... [ 2008-01-04 17:04:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: love...isn't a tragedy ! (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnYamrus on Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 05:58:11 AM AEST
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with that totally ridiculous and childish preamble/intro to your poem i went into it expecting more of the same...even worse. happily, i was very very wrong. your poem was well-crafted, intelligent and interesting. a prime example of how one should never judge a book by its cover. a word to the wise, though. if you're ever submitting something to a magazine, drop the kidspeak. it'd kill your chances in a heartbeat.
john

Re: love...isn't a tragedy ! (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 02:46:15 PM AEST
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i got about half way through before i gave up trying to read it. it is very hard to read with all the slang words and text speech. i would be willing to give it another go if it was typed correctly... i have to agree with john it does put people off....though what i managed to read had a really good start to a potentially amazing poem..

sorry if this sounds really critical and harsh i dont mean to be

all the best x

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