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Array ( [sid] => 139589 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memory [time] => 2008-01-04 18:42:21 [hometext] => Ingredients: A pinch of something you don't want to talk about, a slew of obvious end rhymes, a bunch of cliche images, a bit of inconsistency and one big heap of old habit. Beat well. Bake to a crisp, let cool and force feed to guests. Serves: 1 [bodytext] =>




What happens to a memory that has no place to call its home?
Does it dissolve into the deep of night or linger in the gloam?
Will it hide where no one ever looks? Deny that it exists?
Or loiter in the heavens, a star waiting for a wish?

Will it be the dream a dreamer sees
Colliding with reality
When “I did” was really “I could not”?

Might it simply be forgot?


And will it know it’s been abandoned
Left alone in its own world
Like a child starving for attention?
Like a secret once it’s told?

Will it be the touch that never lighted
On the skin of a lost soul
Or an early morning sunrise
Without the red and gold?

Will it become the poem
I could not write?
A painting of an absent night?
The song you wrote
But never sung?

The whisper of a silent tongue?


Or might it give up trying to be anything at all
And vanish as the sun did on that day I can’t recall?

What will happen to this memory
If I dared to set it free?
Will it find a place to call its home
Or will it...

still

haunt
me?
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 516 [topic] => 76 [informant] => Silent-No-More [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => obsession )

Memory

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 06:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession






What happens to a memory that has no place to call its home?
Does it dissolve into the deep of night or linger in the gloam?
Will it hide where no one ever looks? Deny that it exists?
Or loiter in the heavens, a star waiting for a wish?

Will it be the dream a dreamer sees
Colliding with reality
When “I did” was really “I could not”?

Might it simply be forgot?


And will it know it’s been abandoned
Left alone in its own world
Like a child starving for attention?
Like a secret once it’s told?

Will it be the touch that never lighted
On the skin of a lost soul
Or an early morning sunrise
Without the red and gold?

Will it become the poem
I could not write?
A painting of an absent night?
The song you wrote
But never sung?

The whisper of a silent tongue?


Or might it give up trying to be anything at all
And vanish as the sun did on that day I can’t recall?

What will happen to this memory
If I dared to set it free?
Will it find a place to call its home
Or will it...

still

haunt
me?




Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2008-01-04 18:42:21]
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Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 08:33:56 PM AEST
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An icredibly written, thougt provoking write.
huggs,
emy


Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 08:31:38 AM AEST
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Birthday Cakes&wetsuits.Home Sweet Home-Find A Place To Hide-Still Call It Home---Dreaming- of two to -One-Good Poem:Memory:Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr.


Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 09:02:46 AM AEST
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Beautiful, Snemmy. Loved it. Thought-provoking, well balanced, a delight over my breakfast bagel this morning.

Spike


Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 12:30:36 AM AEST
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I trully loved this as it was like a little voice within asking me the questions I am most likely to be asking in my quiet moments....Splendid indeed...


Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by kaycas on Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 12:44:02 AM AEST
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I thought this was a wonderful poem asking what happens to our memories. Nice subject well written


Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 03:00:23 PM AEST
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'Or will it still haunt me?'

Of course it will.
You've opened your soul to write of it,and write of it you have-most wonderfully.

Den




Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 09:30:15 PM AEST
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Hmmmmm....definitely food for thought.

It would probably haunt me.

It's nice to start my journey back into this world by reading some Silent-No-More. :-)


Timmy

:-)


Re: Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 12:24:13 AM AEST
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Wonderful....




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