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Array ( [sid] => 135317 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Free [time] => 2007-06-17 22:54:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cocoon lay shattered
On forest floor
Pieces of yesterday
Nothing more

Butterfly resting
On tall tree leaf
Recovering
Filled with relief

Off to the moon
Butterfly swoops
No limits now
No backward loops

Flitting amongst stars
Butterfly shines bright
As she flies into
The endless night

Ever forward
Butterfly dreams
No restraints
Nothing as it seems

Butterfly resting
On leaf of tree
Happy just to let
Her spirit run free
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Free

Contributed by NoSaint on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 10:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Cocoon lay shattered
On forest floor
Pieces of yesterday
Nothing more

Butterfly resting
On tall tree leaf
Recovering
Filled with relief

Off to the moon
Butterfly swoops
No limits now
No backward loops

Flitting amongst stars
Butterfly shines bright
As she flies into
The endless night

Ever forward
Butterfly dreams
No restraints
Nothing as it seems

Butterfly resting
On leaf of tree
Happy just to let
Her spirit run free

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2007-06-17 22:54:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 11:04:24 PM AEST
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wow Shari. This is beautiful. I adore the metamorphosis of the
caterpillar/butterfly and you've created a feeling of being light
and free wafting through my soul.

How wonderful!

~Breezy

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 12:22:45 AM AEST
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oooh! aren`t we creative today! very nice work, and a pleasure to read..Vincent

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 12:43:59 AM AEST
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I see you found your poem lol.....

I love this nicely done my friend

Michelle

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 05:12:43 AM AEST
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exquisite and beautiful as the butterfly within, so gently written,

love n' hugs nessa

roses

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 06:58:35 AM AEST
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Different than most of the poetry
I read on here. That's okay though
because I love different. It keeps
things fresh and interesting as does
this poem. Nice work. Very light and
makes one smile. Truly , Doug

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 07:40:10 AM AEST
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Well done. I haven't seen your work in some time. It is good to see you have not skipped a beat. Quite a wonderful job as always. I loved your pleasant words on the butterfly, something with beauty I feel many of us take for granted.

BRAVO!

SCM

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:06:50 AM AEST
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wow beautiful writing

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 01:14:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Shari. I simply love butterflies. Your title of "Free" was so fitting here. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Free (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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butterflys are so beautiful just like your poem I love it xxxx

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