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Morning Song II
Contributed by
ilhar
on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 06:57:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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As I lay next to you I hear the birds chirping
The sun has just begun to shine into the window
My mind wanders back to the passionate night before
A fire begins to rise from deep within me
Only your loving touch can quench the flames
I lay watching you sleep wanting you to arise
I think of how much you mean to me
How lovingly your mouth feels on my body
I softly let out a moan of desire
Gently I curl my body next to yours
The heat of my flesh next to you
Wakes you ever so slightly
So I start to caress you with simple strokes
Soon you are fully awake and ready
To fulfill my dreams again
As you prepare to enter me
You tell me how much you need me
How much you want me
And as we drift on passions tide
How much you
LOVE ME
Copyright ©
ilhar
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2003-12-12 06:57:18]
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Re: Re: Morning Song II
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Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:05:16 AM AEST
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| Man! i am stoned, and this has just sucked me right in, that was amazin, thanks for that experience :D |
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Re: Re: Morning Song II
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Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:06:26 AM AEST
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| beautiful, classy and very sensually sweet poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Re: Morning Song II
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Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 06:08:21 PM AEST
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A dreamy way to start the day.
"I softly let out a moan of desire
Gently I curl my body next to yours
The heat of my flesh next to you
Wakes you ever so slightly"
Love these lines..This write leaves me with tender feelings.Beautiful
Sharon |
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Re: Re: Morning Song II
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Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:13:06 PM AEST
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Wow, Grrlfriend, this was good for me as I'm sure it was for you... ;>)
Done with class!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Re: Morning Song II
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:44:16 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful Shari, and what a tender way you have writing in this style. Outstanding write! |
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