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Don't Do Crack
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 08:44:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't Do Crack html
A
barrage
of
thoughts,
stress
and
love,
the
world’s
all
in
here.
My
cranium
is
just
so
big
for
all
the
Earth,
and
all
that
they
expect
of
me.
When
will
I
disappear?
Although
not
a
thought
should
be
thought
of
leaving
all
my
problems
behind,
but
rather
how
to
deal
with
them
all;
let
me
not
regress
to
rhyme
n. identity of sounds at ends of lines or verses, or in words; word or syllable identical in sound to another; verses marked by rhyme
Do
you
Love
me?
Yes
I
do,
in
Javascripted
code.
Together
now,
forever
we
shall
make
working
models
of
the
inside
of
a
computer.
But
Lo
and
Behold,
behave
yourself,
your
thoughts
are
intertwined
v. 1. to be twisted together, entwined 2. to make love?
Sorry
sir,
I
can’t
help
myself,
what
with,
“Stay in school!”
and
“Clean up your room!”
easily
confused
with
“Stay in your room!”
and
“Clean up school!”
See,
when
the
World
resides
in
you,
you
are
the
World,
and
these
blind
monkeys
on
their
typewriters
could
easily
muddle
up
simple
sayings,
such
as,
‘Suck my dick.’
‘Ah,’
say
the
Philosophers, n. one who studies, possesses, or originates philosophy.
‘a simple sentence seemingly said –
to the Principal??
Don’t be so disrespectful,’
they
begin,
then
one
pipes
up,
‘Might it have been meant for his girlfriend?’
In
principal,
you
never
can
tell,
it’s
all
in
your
head,
or
mine,
as
the
case
may
be.
Suddenly,
the
Feminists,
n. advocates for equal rights, morals, and standards for women
appear.
They
say,
=That is quite disrespectful in itself, =
=to command a girl to commit an act of fellatio.=
Then
the
philosophers
retort,
‘Of course, it comes across that it could contrive
as an incredulous question: “Suck my dick??”’
Internal
thoughts
aside,
I
think
of
pointing
out
that
the
statement
could
have
very
well
been
directed
to
my
foster
dad
for
telling
me
to
clean
my
room.
But
that’s
a
whole
other
avenue,
and
we
really
really
really
really
really
won’t,
will not,
shouldn’t,
shan’t,
not today,
we
really
can’t –
cuz
I’m
not
Gay!!!
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
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2003-12-06 08:44:23]
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Re: Re: Don't Do Crack
(User Rating: 1 )
by on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:15:15 PM AEST
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| Well, I rather enjoyed it till the ending. The "I'm not Gay!!!" part was rather weak. However, the format of the poem is so unique and interesting that it over-shines the end. Groovy write. |
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Re: Re: Don't Do Crack
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by on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:11:33 AM AEST
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| well that was unusual, messed my head up abit, i is recked.... ace write! |
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Re: Re: Don't Do Crack
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by on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 08:25:39 PM AEST
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| very interesting. i love your style. i love how everything runs together but it makes sense. great write. thanks for sharing it with me. |
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Re: Re: Don't Do Crack
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by on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:10:00 PM AEST
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| I wont say I understood it, I am not sure wether I liked it but you have my respect my friend, that was a well done string of ideas seducing me in to one of the best head ***** I have had in awhile. Cudos, and all that wap. |
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