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Afternoon Song
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:38:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suggestive
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Sunlight through the window,warms the bed and satin sheets
As though knowing on this winters day,two lovers come to meet
The flames within the fireplace, dance softly as she lies
Alone for now she dreams away,with big brown lust filled eyes
The bareness of her skin,the tender touch of her slight hand
Takes her further towards her fantasies,to the one who is her man
Deep into sweet arousal,she licks her glossy wanton lips
As she traces manicured nails along tanned thighs and hips
From the heated core of desire,a moment to hold is realised
And through the afternoon silence,she hears her creamy sighs
Still the flames are dancing,yet more tender for her song
As sleep takes her to his loving arms,right where she belongs
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-06-21 04:38:31]
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Re: Re: Afternoon Song
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Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 05:57:00 PM AEST
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| great poem i loved it so... sensual keep it up ~Apryl |
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Re: Re: Afternoon Song
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Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 07:40:56 PM AEST
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| everyone needs to sing like this, beautiful and very sexy! |
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Re: Re: Afternoon Song
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Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 11:19:48 PM AEST
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| is it getting warm in here or is it me..or....is it you?? ;o) mmm mmmm |
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Re: Re: Afternoon Song
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Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:01:56 AM AEST
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Seems like a HOT afternoon....sensual write.
jenni |
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Re: Re: Afternoon Song
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Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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| dearest sharon, only you could write a poem of this nature and have it be as classy as this one is, beautifully well done, as always:) *turns on her fan* lol, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Re: Afternoon Song
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Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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Not offensive at all. Quite nice. Sensuality is beautiful.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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