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[sid] => 186797
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Upside Down World
[time] => 2020-01-27 20:10:05
[hometext] => Accepting the reality of the world comes with relief and disdain
[bodytext] =>
Youth painted a picture age has destroyed.
Glimmer and guild once thrilled a young boy.
Perfect white teeth ‘neath tuxedo bow,
hair wrought in art, all just for show.
Jets and gondolas, palatial groomed lawns
hide seething creatures of pure evil spawn.
No longer desired, such childish yearns,
replaced now by fires built only to burn
those maggots of humans, by skin and by bone;
would fate take them all, leaving good people alone.
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[informant] => invierno
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Upside Down World
Contributed by
invierno
on
Monday, 27th January 2020 @ 08:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Youth painted a picture age has destroyed.
Glimmer and guild once thrilled a young boy.
Perfect white teeth ‘neath tuxedo bow,
hair wrought in art, all just for show.
Jets and gondolas, palatial groomed lawns
hide seething creatures of pure evil spawn.
No longer desired, such childish yearns,
replaced now by fires built only to burn
those maggots of humans, by skin and by bone;
would fate take them all, leaving good people alone.
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invierno
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Re: Upside Down World
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Monday, 27th January 2020 @ 08:27:58 PM AEST (User
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Indeed it does. Great write.
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Re: Upside Down World
(User Rating: 1 ) by shereal_14 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2020 @ 07:49:56 AM AEST (User
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Wow....there really are no words that can describe how your words have made me feel...just wow. The world, as well as every person In it, puts on a facade. But with your words I feel as though I/'/ve been able to lift the world/'/s veil, and finally can see beneath every person/'/s mask... |
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Re: Upside Down World
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 30th January 2020 @ 07:12:48 AM AEST (User
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yes indeed as time continues to flow
our perceptions sure do change
no doubt
well done.... |
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Re: Upside Down World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 18th March 2020 @ 11:45:05 PM AEST (User
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I remember as a child how everything was new and exciting. I took everything and everyone at face value because I didn/'/t know any better..
Now I/'/m familiar with the poison in it and I see everything and everyone for what they really are.
Sad but true
Steve |
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