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[title] => Time To Say Goodbye
[time] => 2019-12-12 14:44:44
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[bodytext] => I brought you pretty flowers in the spring
Even though your phone refused to ring
I dreamt of you in the dark of night
But my dreams were interrupted
When you turned on the light
In my mind is a picture of your pretty face
Somehow it seems out of place
I used to love you with all my heart
But no longer cause we`re apart
All of my tears and fears
Have run dry
Time to say goodbye
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Time To Say Goodbye
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Thursday, 12th December 2019 @ 02:44:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I brought you pretty flowers in the spring
Even though your phone refused to ring
I dreamt of you in the dark of night
But my dreams were interrupted
When you turned on the light
In my mind is a picture of your pretty face
Somehow it seems out of place
I used to love you with all my heart
But no longer cause we`re apart
All of my tears and fears
Have run dry
Time to say goodbye
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jamesstockdale
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2019-12-12 14:44:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time To Say Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by ammar on
Sunday, 15th December 2019 @ 01:25:45 PM AEST (User
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Very well written. The imagery is simple, yet so full of life. I really like the rhyme scheme too. Keep writing!
Peace
Ammar |
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Re: Time To Say Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 17th December 2019 @ 07:36:05 AM AEST (User
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What a beautiful goodbye. Well written. Always remember, the past will always seem more beautiful than it truly was, but that doesn/'/t mean we can/'/t appreciate it. :) |
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Re: Time To Say Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th December 2019 @ 08:21:38 AM AEST (User
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Each time I see the title I start thinking of REO Speedwagon`s "Time For Me To Fly."😄
I know it`s hard to say good-bye but it`s probably for the best.
Love the poem as usual, Jimmy.
JimmyTimmy
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Re: Time To Say Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 19th December 2019 @ 02:49:56 AM AEST (User
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Reminds me of that scene in blade runner
with rutger hauer ending conversation with
*Time to die*
ooh ooh love hurts..... |
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Re: Time To Say Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Thursday, 19th December 2019 @ 03:51:39 AM AEST (User
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Great write
Hannah B |
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