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[title] => Living Without Life
[time] => 2019-11-26 13:36:22
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Face clouded
with despair,
Eyes with no one
living there.
Dreams tossed in
a careless pile
Hearts that can
no longer smile.
Souls awash upon
the shore,
Wondering why God
has closed the door.
Living without life
Is easy to do
For I have done it-
my existence through.
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Living Without Life
Contributed by
n2dep2care
on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 01:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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//
Face clouded
with despair,
Eyes with no one
living there.
Dreams tossed in
a careless pile
Hearts that can
no longer smile.
Souls awash upon
the shore,
Wondering why God
has closed the door.
Living without life
Is easy to do
For I have done it-
my existence through.
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n2dep2care
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2019-11-26 13:36:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Living Without Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 03:56:38 PM AEST (User
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Jesus.
Another poem with that 1-2 punch at the end.
Some choice lines in here. The last three words make an impact like a body hitting the floor.
I also like the title line and the first and second stanza really stand out.
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Re: Living Without Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th November 2019 @ 05:27:46 AM AEST (User
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Perfect! |
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Re: Living Without Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Wednesday, 4th December 2019 @ 08:14:41 PM AEST (User
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This was a beautiful description of what sounds like profound sadness.
Great write.
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Re: Living Without Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th December 2019 @ 01:17:59 AM AEST (User
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I can feel your emotion pouring out of this one, almost like you are emptying the chambers of your heart.
Powerful, evocative and moving, just some of the things I have to say about this.
Particularly loved the lines
Dreams tossed in
A careless pile
Bravo!!
Steve |
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