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[title] => tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
[time] => 2019-11-04 04:26:34
[hometext] => deceit reside within the shadows of familiarity
[bodytext] => the day started out as any other day
the sun envelop the moonlight glare into oblivion
the clouds covered the remaining view from the sun lit blinded eyes
both arms ache from blows felt earlier in the day as I contemplated living a life within betrayal grasp
borrow time are all i have to offer now as my life remains trapped within itself and others
borrow money taken from me during a night stay over from a so call friend and enemy now
borrow tokens of youth long since past are all gone now and will never return either this day nor the next one
borrow spirits roam the cloudy evening skies from beneath the sarcasm of deceit and memories long since past
your jokes are not funny; your rhymes were never clever; your betrayals were not worthy of my present
your dislikes are not of my own doing; your hatred derived from a bad childhood are no excuse for bad behavior now
your job reflects who you are now; your divorce were of your own making; your lies were never clever enough to fool anyone
your present now are that of the devil//'//s afterbirth; your mind is that of a rabid dog bite; your heart is blacken from years of abuse
moments forever will pass by unnoticed; time will forever remain constant and benign; space is and will forever be infinite and mysterious
rubies are forever beautiful and unique; diamonds will forever be beautiful and hard; I will forever be and remain an enigma of earth
clever boy he were that saw a future before all others yet lived that future out as all others do regardless of youth
clever girl she were that saw a rancid shadow of herself yesterday yet never manage to escape that past thereby tarnishing her soul to it//'//s core.
Copyright © Johnny Hadnot 11.03.2019
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tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
Contributed by
slogan
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Monday, 4th November 2019 @ 04:26:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the day started out as any other day
the sun envelop the moonlight glare into oblivion
the clouds covered the remaining view from the sun lit blinded eyes
both arms ache from blows felt earlier in the day as I contemplated living a life within betrayal grasp
borrow time are all i have to offer now as my life remains trapped within itself and others
borrow money taken from me during a night stay over from a so call friend and enemy now
borrow tokens of youth long since past are all gone now and will never return either this day nor the next one
borrow spirits roam the cloudy evening skies from beneath the sarcasm of deceit and memories long since past
your jokes are not funny; your rhymes were never clever; your betrayals were not worthy of my present
your dislikes are not of my own doing; your hatred derived from a bad childhood are no excuse for bad behavior now
your job reflects who you are now; your divorce were of your own making; your lies were never clever enough to fool anyone
your present now are that of the devil//'//s afterbirth; your mind is that of a rabid dog bite; your heart is blacken from years of abuse
moments forever will pass by unnoticed; time will forever remain constant and benign; space is and will forever be infinite and mysterious
rubies are forever beautiful and unique; diamonds will forever be beautiful and hard; I will forever be and remain an enigma of earth
clever boy he were that saw a future before all others yet lived that future out as all others do regardless of youth
clever girl she were that saw a rancid shadow of herself yesterday yet never manage to escape that past thereby tarnishing her soul to it//'//s core.
Copyright © Johnny Hadnot 11.03.2019
Copyright ©
slogan
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2019-11-04 04:26:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th November 2019 @ 10:39:24 AM AEST (User
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Wow, this is great. Remind me to never make you mad! ;)
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Thursday, 7th November 2019 @ 03:41:28 PM AEST (User
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A poem filled with bitterness. I hope it doesn/'/t tarnish you as well. |
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Re: tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th November 2019 @ 08:44:47 AM AEST (User
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everything seems to remind me of that one day
when I called it cold turkey on the diet coke |
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Re: tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 14th November 2019 @ 04:36:07 PM AEST (User
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You have a lot to say and seem to be gaining insight into some trials in your personal life.
It’s a journey ... Sometimes certain unexpected deceits shake us to our core, but growth is always the final outcome.
So much more to this line here ...
//as I contemplated living a
life within betrayal grasp//
“contemplated” being the keyword. Well done!
~Scorp |
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Re: tHe Devil`s aFteRbiRtH
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wronglyaccused on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2020 @ 04:34:47 AM AEST (User
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You are a great writer but you shouldn’t use your hateful lying words to write things that hurt others. This needs to be written about someone else so it can hold more truth. It is common sense three people in the house and two have something missing. Oh and my jokes are funny you just can’t see past your damage hateful sole to laugh and have fun. |
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