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[sid] => 186625
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Heaven, where are You?
[time] => 2019-11-03 03:33:53
[hometext] => We spend so much time looking we miss what is all around us
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Chopin, light as dawn fog,
misty as a leaping trout at birth of day,
falls with downy joy upon ears willing
to engage a beauty.
Heaven, it appears, is all around us,
springing from dewy grass,
or sleeping over the pink horizon.
Odd a life with open eyes always on the seek,
should only find heaven two thirds into my sleep.
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[topic] => 21
[informant] => invierno
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Heaven, where are You?
Contributed by
invierno
on
Sunday, 3rd November 2019 @ 03:33:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Chopin, light as dawn fog,
misty as a leaping trout at birth of day,
falls with downy joy upon ears willing
to engage a beauty.
Heaven, it appears, is all around us,
springing from dewy grass,
or sleeping over the pink horizon.
Odd a life with open eyes always on the seek,
should only find heaven two thirds into my sleep.
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invierno
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Re: Heaven, where are You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd November 2019 @ 04:13:37 AM AEST (User
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oh Chopin,
in the lake, a fish,
and in everything you might
care to see if one looks forth for,
Some torch, one might
carry forth, before they
know just how to describe
just how much its worth.
You just wrote an inspiration
down. A re-connection,
for a reason why to carry the torch.
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: Heaven, where are You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 6th November 2019 @ 05:55:45 AM AEST (User
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Things move so fast now
you blink and you miss something
in the so called old days
we took our time thought things over
now we just rush rush
most times not realizing what we missed....
nothing is simple anymore. |
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Re: Heaven, where are You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Thursday, 7th November 2019 @ 03:55:54 PM AEST (User
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Hmmmm I think I saw a picture of it on Facebook...oh wait, did I just miss something? |
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Re: Heaven, where are You?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 24th December 2019 @ 09:09:55 PM AEST (User
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A clever write, by a craftsman who knows the art of mesmerising and entertaining those who choose to read.
I/'//'/m glad I chose to read this, my time was rewarded.
Thanks
Steve |
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