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[title] => When I fall in love it will be forever
[time] => 2019-07-15 01:14:59
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[bodytext] => It came without a sound.
In its eyes I almost drowned.
And when it was over, I waited
forever at the lost and found.
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[notes] => Edited for spelling, per request ~ Moderator_18 July 15 2019
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When I fall in love it will be forever
Contributed by
winniss
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Monday, 15th July 2019 @ 01:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It came without a sound.
In its eyes I almost drowned.
And when it was over, I waited
forever at the lost and found.
Copyright ©
winniss
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2019-07-15 01:14:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: When I fall in love it will be forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 16th July 2019 @ 12:02:46 AM AEST (User
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Been there.
An awesome chasm of silence like a wall of nothingness is all the remains.
We only come to realize its power by its stunning absence.
An entire love story in 4 lines. Wow. Cuts like a knife.
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Re: When I fall in love it will be forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 16th July 2019 @ 05:24:09 AM AEST (User
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I am glad somebody found it
short and to the point
well done |
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