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[title] => Change of Seasons
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[bodytext] => amidst the sun brightly burning
are silken threads woven in the sky
puffs of cotton slowly churning
evaporating before my eyes
you know, waves, they crash, and flux, and flow
somehow speaking everything my heart could know
and all the pawns do come and go
as I ache for all those oh so long agos
but it’s what you chose
standing tall like soldiers fearless
trees do tower miles high above
as sure as my lover dearest
likewise, I’m constantly in awe of
but you, my friend, like seasons do change
over and over again you rearrange
and in your dust I’m left estranged
‘cause you never asked me to make this exchange
and I find it strange
but storms, you know, they rage and ravage
‘til everything in their path has been scavenged
ripped apart, unduly damaged
it’s hard to look at a landscape so savage
that once was lavish
but it’s what you chose
just like clouds
you disappeared
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Change of Seasons
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 2nd July 2019 @ 04:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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amidst the sun brightly burning
are silken threads woven in the sky
puffs of cotton slowly churning
evaporating before my eyes
you know, waves, they crash, and flux, and flow
somehow speaking everything my heart could know
and all the pawns do come and go
as I ache for all those oh so long agos
but it’s what you chose
standing tall like soldiers fearless
trees do tower miles high above
as sure as my lover dearest
likewise, I’m constantly in awe of
but you, my friend, like seasons do change
over and over again you rearrange
and in your dust I’m left estranged
‘cause you never asked me to make this exchange
and I find it strange
but storms, you know, they rage and ravage
‘til everything in their path has been scavenged
ripped apart, unduly damaged
it’s hard to look at a landscape so savage
that once was lavish
but it’s what you chose
just like clouds
you disappeared
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MoonlitAngel
... [
2019-07-02 16:26:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Change of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 3rd July 2019 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST (User
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Great writing and the title was perfect.
The flow is heavenly..... I think this was your best ever.
Me likes!!! |
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Re: Change of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th July 2019 @ 01:12:46 AM AEST (User
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I read this through a few times,
wondering,
about a lot of things,
seasons, and changes
transpire due to time,
but people change too,
that people change is
expected, we hope they
do for the best, but never
forget who they might truly
be.
this poem demonstrates
a part of the writer, something
new, but then again,
it is poetry at its best.
Peace! |
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Re: Change of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Odessa19 on
Thursday, 4th July 2019 @ 03:41:57 AM AEST (User
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Captivating read! I was with you throughout. |
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Re: Change of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 6th July 2019 @ 12:06:40 AM AEST (User
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People certainly are hard to fathom sometimes. Full of surprises, like Mother Nature herself.
I love the way you have woven the changing of the seasons with a change in friendship
Clever write
Steve |
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Re: Change of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 6th July 2019 @ 06:37:27 AM AEST (User
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hmm excellent flow
felt the pain in your release
loved the landscape you created
well done
thanx for sharing........ |
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