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[title] => Under The Daisies
[time] => 2019-06-07 15:25:15
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[bodytext] => Listening to the dead
Talking out of my head
Thinking I`ve been mislead
Nothing in my head but dread
I`m the slave they crave
Leading me to misbehave
They make the lazy the crazy
Soon to be buried under the daisies
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Under The Daisies
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Friday, 7th June 2019 @ 03:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Listening to the dead
Talking out of my head
Thinking I`ve been mislead
Nothing in my head but dread
I`m the slave they crave
Leading me to misbehave
They make the lazy the crazy
Soon to be buried under the daisies
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Re: Under The Daisies
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 9th June 2019 @ 02:47:50 AM AEST (User
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Them negative voices in our head for ever lurking in the back of our minds....the never ending battle to not go rambo continues.... |
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Re: Under The Daisies
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 11th June 2019 @ 01:50:49 AM AEST (User
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Daymares. Scary thoughts that bloom in the daylight. Your poem bestows authenticity upon them because they don/'/t hide in the darkness.
We have all visited this place of doubt about ourselves - it is an inner battle between our opposite selves. How odd to listen to us argue with ourselves! Thank you for reminding me that I
wish to remain above the daisies a while longer.It is a good thing to be certain of!
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Re: Under The Daisies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:01:31 AM AEST (User
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// Hmmm, 🌀. I do not remember this one. Weird or the rare appearance and disappearance of say, another _____.
Huh.
This is absolutely brilliant. Especially "listening to the dead talking out of" your head. I love it!!!!
I would tip you but there is no tip button. Yeah...that is my excuse today.
Thanks,
Dugan |
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