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[title] => Punchline
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[bodytext] => He’s a son without dimension
A battered hate churning new
Purple fisted ruin and tension
Here all of the shoes are blue
The ascension full of attention
Try emotionally fenced in truth
After school honorable mention
They stepped and the top blew
Another beating and detention
Apprehension pushed him too
Evil has zero comprehension
The headline frothing in view
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Punchline
Contributed by
duff
on
Monday, 27th May 2019 @ 02:27:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He’s a son without dimension
A battered hate churning new
Purple fisted ruin and tension
Here all of the shoes are blue
The ascension full of attention
Try emotionally fenced in truth
After school honorable mention
They stepped and the top blew
Another beating and detention
Apprehension pushed him too
Evil has zero comprehension
The headline frothing in view
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duff
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2019-05-27 02:27:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Punchline
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 27th May 2019 @ 07:05:17 PM AEST (User
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That is dark and well written.
You also caged him in a box. Very interesting write! |
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Re: Punchline
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Tuesday, 28th May 2019 @ 01:20:21 PM AEST (User
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Dark and all too prevalent in the news today.I like the unique structure and word choices. |
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Re: Punchline
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 30th May 2019 @ 08:37:13 AM AEST (User
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crazy off balance this flow has
well done
dark and intriguing.... |
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Re: Punchline
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 30th June 2019 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST (User
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Oh yes. I feel this one deep in my soul. Juicy lines that resonate.
Punchline indeed. Thanks for sharing...great to see you’re writing again.
~Scorp |
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Re: Punchline
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 6th July 2019 @ 12:40:44 AM AEST (User
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Dark and brooding, powerful and mesmerising
Loved the raw energy in this.
Great write, can/'/t fault it
Steve |
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